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Standing in a room with a blindfold on he sits awaiting the moment of judgement. Sentenced to death he faces the realization that no one will miss his disappearance. He was nothing but a black spot in society and was considered the outcast of all conversation. What if I said other things... what if I... I Suddenly a light opened up in front of his blindfold.

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((:fluttershysad::fluttercry: bro...))

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He was about to ask who was there, but suddenly found all the wind was knocked out of him by a fist to his chest. He fell to the floor gasping for air.

"You are weak... you are pathetic... No one has even come to save you." The voice was full of conviction and malaise. "Say something you worthless piece of CRAP!"

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Just then a mysterious figure came crashing in. "You stay away from him!!!" He exclaimed as he tackled the attacker to the ground.

2547486 The man kicks this mysterious figure off. "Who the heck are you!?" He pulled out a gun and aimed it at him.

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The man stumbled back to his feet and grabbed for the gun. "run! Just run!" He yelled out as he fought for the gun.

2547561 With a bit of struggle, Kevin was able to lift the blindfold. "Bro...?" He looked up to him and noticed he was fighting another man. "Get off of him!" Kevin screamed rising up to his feet.

In amist the struggle the gun fired off at Kevin and he immediately stopped. "F-Fransisco..." He took a step back and fell down to the floor as the man lost control of the gun.

"NOO! GUARDS!"

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Francisco pushed the man away as the gun fell to the floor. "Bro!" He yelled desperately as he ran over to him. "No... No, no, no ,no... Please bro speak to me!" He pleaded tearfully.

2547732 Kevin coughed up a bit of blood. "You... know... I couldn't have asked for a better brother..." He said looking up with tear-filled eyes.

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"I... I'm so sorry... P-please forgive me... I-if I had just..." Francisco blubbered as he held hid brother in his arms.

2547834 "D-don't w-worry... I... I w-will never... lea...leave y-you." Kevin's breaths became short and sharp.

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"I... I-I know man... I'll never leave you either..." Francisco whispered, his eyes puffy and red.

2547885 "I... I l-love..... you b-bro..." He started to struggle with each breath.

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"I-I love you too man..." Francisco was physically shaking as tears flowed down his cheeks.

2548041 Kevin rubbed his cheek on his brothers arm as he felt his body grow cold. Suddenly his body started to glow brightly as a light covered him head to toe.

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Francisco had to cover his eyes as the light nearly blinded him. "W-wha..."

2548097 When the light dissipated, there was only a tiny foal in his place.

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"B-but... How..." He muttered as he picked the foal up and held him softly.

2548220 "THERE HE IS MEN SHOOT HIM!" Guards came into the room and opened fire on Francisco.

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"Oh crap!" Holding the foal tight in his hands Francisco ran for his life.

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2555771 A car pulled up, and a strange but friendly looking woman opened the passenger door. @hurry, inside!"

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2710381 "Do NOT LET THEM ESCAPE!" The Commander hollered.

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The foal held tightly in his arms he ran toward the getaway as fast as his feet would carry him.

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2710737 The heart beat of the small foal began to diminish away in the arms of Francisco.

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As he got into the strange lady's car he cradled the foal gently in his arms. "It'll be alright... Come on... Everything will be fine..." he said with a hint of panic behind his voice

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2782127 Without bothering to wait for the door to be closed, the mysterious woman stomped her foot to the accelerator. The car LURCHED INTO ACTION! and moments later they were traveling sixty miles per hour down the highway.

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2782725 The foal stirred and rolled in in Francisco's arms.

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2785533 ((I'm gonna need more context right about now))

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Francisco jerked back lightly as the car skidded down the road. Giving the woman a confused yet appreciative glance, Francisco looked back down to the foal, loosening his arms as he brushed a bit of his mane out of his eyes.

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