1971501 *I roll in the other direction onto my hands and knees.* f-fuck me! * I beg as I present myself to you*

1971515
*I place one hand on your ass cheek and another on your member* I will, but first... *I bring my face to your tight hole and lick up your taint while slowly stroking your cock*

1971554 *I gasp loudly and bury my head into my pillow. The wet of feel of your tongue is too much and I feel myself skirting the edge of an orgasm.* F-fade please fuck me. I-I can't take anymore!

1971578
If you say so... *Pushing you down slightly as I angle my dick for entry into your tight little asshole*

1971611 *in bite the pillow in preparation of your entry as I teeter of the cliff*

1971617
*Seeing as you're prepared for entry, I decide to not hold back as I thrust into you with full force, forcing my penis almost halfway up your butt hole before coming to a stop. I grit my teeth in determination as I attempt to go further in*

1971635 ()sorry but I really need to sleep. To be continued.()

1971671
((Gotcha, goodnight))

1970415 I'm in public, but I did some of the edit.

1972475
Okay, I have to go in a couple minutes though, I'll look at it once I get home.

1971635 *almost immediately I scream into my pillow in pain and orgasmic passion. I tighten around you as my entire body clenches up.*

1972495 ((fade?))

1976084
((Sorry, been a bit busy, saw your posts, getting an extra editor, or even just a prereader, sounds like a good idea, since I'm more of a grammatical editor. I'll get to reading your edit now))

1974367
*I begin pulling out slowly as I get ready to thrust deeper into your rectum* "Ohh... Vikinga..."

1976517>>1976517 *I moan softer as a empty feeling washes over me. The euphoria of your cock pulling my boyhood inside out runs through my body like hot fire*

1976608
*I quickly jerk my hips back slightly and shift my weight as I thrust back into you. I let out a stifled moan as I attempt to repeat the process*

1976725 *I moan harder as my orgasm finally reaches its summit and hot cum sprays all over my sheets* fade!

((not the end yet!))

1976759
*I grab you arms for leverage as I begin to pick up the pace of my thrusting* "Ngh..."

1976869 *I squeek as the thrusting becomes harder and faster. Already my ass begins to feel like there was a fire in it. I love it*

1977159
"Vi...Vikinga... I'm so close..." *I continue thrusting into your boyhood. I pull you up to me and force my tongue in between your lips as I nearly reach my climax*

1977159
((A few things with your revised version))

... eventually... probably.

((Both of those words should be capitalized.))

I never understood how...
... as the next pony.

((...Meh, I don't really like referencing other stories and characters outside of the actual story, in my experience it almost never ends well))

She was also the third to fourth best known mare in Equestria. A mare who would be recognized by even the most uninformed of ponies.

((I think throwing how famous she is out there might not be a good idea, although I do like how you went into deeper detail with Twilight's description))

((Other than that, it seems pretty good. I think after one or two more revisions this'll be publishing worthy))

1977549 **reference to what?**
**those are not supposed to be capitalized, they are extensions of the previous sentence.**

1977509 * moan into your mouth as you thrust into me from behind with my back arched painfully. every inch of myself is given to you as I feel a second climax approaching*

1977585
((The reference to Snowdrop))

1977596
*With one final thrust I release my load deep inside of you, a bit of it dribbling out of your rectum as I moan deeply. I wrap my arms around your waist as I nearly finish my climax inside of you*

1977632 ((oops miss read.))
I groan in soft pleasure as you fill me to the brim. Everything goes white, and I finish for the second time as one of your dicks small twitches pushes me over the edge.*

(( 1 more?))

1977801
((I have to go to sleep in a little while... Maybe tomorrow))

*I collapse on top of you, my body completely spent of energy. I pull you in close as I give you another passionate kiss*

1977832 ((not even one spanking?)) Fade, I'm sorry I'm so dirty.

1977850
((Y u tempt me? ))

*I stare lovingly into your eyes* You're not dirty... *I put an arm around your waist as I kiss your cheek*

1977865 (( because I've been naughty and deserve one.)) I am dirty... you should punish me. *I whisper softly into your ear, as we now face each other*

1977876
((Well, tomorrow's the weekend, I should be able to have more time to do stuff to you then... Could you please wait until then?))

*I melt as your words and your gaze seems to almost hypnotize me into a state of euphoria* Well... Maybe... B-but only if you want me to...

1977865 ((fine ah can wait))

1977911 *sighs* why can't we do some more BDSM?

1983947
((Please just put this on pause for a bit longer. I can't rightly do this knowing Shutter's hurting like he is))

1983977 yeah... *sigh* I just don't know what to do about it. It makes me avoid it slightly when I can't deal with a sutuation.

1984004
I know how you feel... This is the first time in a while that I'm not able to help Shutter through something like this...

1984024 *hugs fade* I miss him.

1984156
*hugs you back*

I miss him too... I'm gonna try again to get him to join back, but not right now, he's gone through too much already. Maybe tomorrow... You have the group open right?

1984177 yes, for him. Unless you have any friends to invite. Jk.

1984283
Alright, have you tried talking to him recently? I think that might help.

1984296 yes :

1984434
So you have been talking to him? That's good to hear... Have you made any headway with him?

1984449 kinda, but he asked me to do somethung and before I could do it my phone died. He probably thinks I was refusing him.

1984463
What did he ask you to do, if you don't mind saying.

Regardless of what it was, I'm sure he'll understand if you tell him that.

1984484 kiss him ((I astumed on the cheek))

1984505
Aww, that's so sweet

1984533 I posted Scrubble to the filly rp group, but her age might be a issue.

1984735
Saw that, think I'll wait on posting Twisted until later though. If anything, you might just need to age her down, and her canon for that group might need to change a bit, although I don't know really.