Alright Vikinga, before we go any further into this, I need to know, am I still going to be your editor?

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YES! YES AND YES!
more so, I am going to have things triple check (2 by you 1 by me). I want this new story/rewrite to have EVERYTHING perfect when it is published. I want to rewrite the first chapters mostly and then I'm just gonna start writing new ones.

Scribble will now be 13 and in her second year of highschool

that is the digital rough draft of the stories' image, and I hope to have some cool dividers and such.

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*sorry old rough draft*

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Looks nice, and I support you wanting to remake the story, with revisions and such. I know you'll do a great job of it anyways, but I'd really like to help you.

1928618 well, my first change is going to be the first one or two paragraphs of the first chapter. They are kinda irrelevant, and I want to make the story more about Twilight and Winter.

if You could look at those and offer suggestions, I'd give you special hug.

1928721
I'd be happy to look it over and give you my thoughts on it

1928618
also, another edit.

this one is trying to be more like MLP (I still have the one before this one)

1928750
Looks awesome, I really like how the eyes came out, very feminine, very adorable

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1928874
*squee!*

How many edits do you have drawn up?

1928932 Im doing all of this as we speak

1928932 want to know what's gonna happen in the story? Or at least, what I plan to add next chapter?

1928932

1928967
Yes please.

1928982 the next chapter will be like started it back before I decided to rewrite the story. The new story rewrite comes first tho.

1929064
Very nice, I like it a lot.

1929197 thanks! I'm working on the first chapter right now tho.

1929197 also, I might have to just do a edit on the original version of the story, because of dumb rules.

1929320
To that point, it depends on how much you change the story. Of course, I think if you put a disclaimer on it, or maybe unpublish the current version once you're done, it should be okay.

1929380>>1929380 I hope so, otherwise it won't get any publicity at all.

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... ..................................... leaves thread.

1929810>>1929380>>1929380 hey, you cant leave! We still need to discuss the whole "you being the baby in my belly thing"

1929810

Please don't go...

1929887>>1930004
... You still want me...

1930035
Of course we still want you! Why wouldn't we want you to be part of our family?

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Scribble and me both want you to be here

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... but didn't you say that I was going to be an awkward child.

1930163>>1930067 I said it might be awkward. I never said "Would", and a awkward child is better than no.

1930163
Man, I know for a fact that you're not going to be an awkward child. Just look at My Little Shutterbutter! That was honestly one of the most adorable RPs I've ever been in, and it was all thanks to you

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I have to wake up early tomorrow, so I'm gonna log off now. I'll talk to you both later. Goodnight.

1930193 I'm still working on it,

1930164
.... where do I fit in.

Curled up in a ball, I look around and see my surroundings to be like space as I see nothing with my developing eyes. I need to stretch a little so I push my leg out to do so. My feet seem to gently rub up against something soft.

1930237 "buck" I grunt out as I feel a light kick. Me and Fade are in the hospital, and we are trying to get a ultra sound done.1930229

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"D-did the baby just..." I ask, startled at Vikinga's sudden curse. 1930237

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I can hear voices, I know these voices. They mean so much to me. I can't help, but to be content from hearing them. I let out another soft kick in my moment of glee.

1931997>>1932493 I clench my teeth and nod. "Y-yeah."

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I held Vikinga's hand sympathetically. Judging from her expression, I could imagine how uncomfortable the kicks made her.

1934087>>1932493 My grip lightens as the kicking stops. Thanks.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/418106 *sorry but I cant create links using the button right this sec*
the password is Pony or pony
This is the current status of the chapter 1 rewrite

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(I thought that would be more of a touching 'fade feel your baby kick moment'. I guess I was wrong.)

1935866
((Hmmm... ))

1936007>>1936139 (what did you think of the link?)) I lay back down and hold my breath. When no more kicks come I relax my muscles ((I'm rather small, a baby isn't going to leave much room and I'm pretty sure I would be constantly soar))

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(i'm sorry to cause you pain then.))

1936419 (( your worth it)) I lovingly rub my belly twice.

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I place my hand over Vikinga's. I smile down at her, and then to her stomach.

1936477 ((what did you think of the part I had rewritten?))

1936521
((I'm honestly not too sure... How much of it have you changed from the original?))

1936549 ((the first paragraphs, I also put in that picture of my extended signature.))

1936774
((Hm... I don't know, it kinda feels like there's a bit too much exposition right off the bat, but it might just be me. Also, it kinda feels like it's lacking Scribble's personality in places))

1936871 compared to how it was?

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((I think so, but then again, I haven't read your earlier chapters in a while))