So my first grimmdark is taking longer then expected, the story is rather lengthy but i prefer to release it 2 chapters each one being no more then 10,000 words each. But before i continue i would like someone to asses what i have so far before i finish the rough draft and start the final copy.

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Don't be in a rush to post.
Take your time and let ideas bubble around in your head for a bit.
I find that sometimes I think of extra details that I could add or stuff I missed.

That being said, you do have to post.
PM the link to your story and I will check it out.