I need someone who is willing to read the first chapter and any future chapters of a story I’m working on, and I need someone who’s willing to do it for free. I need that person/people to tell me what mistakes I have made so that I can fix them. The story is called Ponified. I hope it’s not too much to ask. Thank you.

I don't think I can because I am so bad at writing I use programs. By the way, I recromend grammerly if you cant find a co-writer.

I can possibly help with editing.