Ponies in the Military 154 members · 126 stories
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I just came up with this and wanted to know if anybody thinks it's a good idea.

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Summary:

“War is supposed to be fought away from home. That is how the world’s supposed to work, right?”

Retro Sax is a pony who wanders into the quiet little town of Ponyville, looking for a place to simply play music. It was what kept him going for five years. However, he fell ill soon, and was taken in by a kind young mare. Soon after, he meets some old faces and makes new friends. Retro begins to finally feel like he could settle here and let the past go.

That is, until the Equestrian Guard come and put posters up demanding the arrest of an Equestrian Marine by the name of 1st Lieutenant Retrospect Saxon for the murder of his commanding officer. Now on the run from even those he had once considered his friends, Retro begins to wonder: What was he really running from? The law, or his past?

Feedback is appreciated!

Interesting. I would give it a read.

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