Hey, guys. So, I've run into a bit of a snag on my Assassinverse-Prototype project, entitled Evolution. The issue I'm having is with a particular part of Chapter 2. In this section, Alex Mercer saves a drunken Rainbow Dash from a group of Traditionalist thugs who want to "have their way with her," only to proceed to go on a rampage purely for the sake of letting the Traditionalists know he's there, that he's coming for them, and that...

"NOTHING WILL PROTECT YOU FROM ME! NOT MEN! NOT WEAPONS! NOT ARMOR!!!"

What I need is someone who knows what the Hell Prototype is, knows who Alex Mercer is, and knows their way around action sequences with incredibly graphic violence of the sort usually found in M-rated games. I'm not expecting a lot of support on this given my track record, but I thought it was worth a shot anyways. And seeing as this is the overly extensive editors group, I figure the first chapter of Evolution could use a little TLC as well.