I'm guessing based on some things like the Mr. Handy and Crystal City you where partially inspired by Fallout 4? Nothing wrong with that of course, my fanfic was partially inspired by New Vegas... only without Vegas.
7036523 Nice eye. Indeed, I mas tremendously inspired by Fallout 4. In fact, the announcement of Fallout 4 spurred my to write this story. But, those inspirations are about where it stops. The rest of my story is going to be completely unique. I hope you enjoy it.
As for your story. I definitely noticed that it was based off of New Vegas. You aren't exactly subtle about it. But hey, to each their own. After all, I find your story completely enjoyable.
In fact, our stories take place at nearly the same time. Mine three years after the events of FoE, Yours five years. I also plan to have my story take place on a long stretch of time (3-5 years) Which means my story will be quite long. And if you don't have a problem against it, there's something I've always wanted to do. Wanna do a combination chapter?
Just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I enjoy your story so far.
You ALMOST lost me when the Overmare agreed to use the Stable door to repair the water purifier.... personally, I just couldn't believe that decision was actually made... I mean, what sane pony would voluntarily destroy the only thing keeping the supposedly dangerous outside world outside.....
However, I suspended my disbelief, kept reading, and am now enjoying the characters and the plot so far, so you definitely grabbed my attention. Keep it up!
Alright, back to editing my story and planning out the few chapters for me!
7040318 I appreciate you enjoying my story. I actually have a counter argument to your reasoning, but as I don't want to anger you and lose you as a faithful reader, it will not be presented forth.
Furthermore, the missing Stable door will bring some interesting plot points into the future, trust me. And when those times do come, I hope you very much enjoy them.
So again, thank you for the positive comments, and personal feedback.
You don't have to worry about angering me.... maybe before I tried writing my own story I would get angry about it.. but now I know that sometimes there is more to it.
If you don't mind sharing it in public, I am quite interested in hearing the counter argument... it may help me to see what the thought process was... if you want to PM is, you can do that as well.
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Glad my story peaks your curiosity. And trust me, it only goes downhill from here for Vanilla!
Well, that was an interesting fanfnic so far, I look forward to seeing more of it.
7036392
Gracias senorita. I appreciate it. Positive comments are always appreciated.
7036456 You're welcome.
I'm guessing based on some things like the Mr. Handy and Crystal City you where partially inspired by Fallout 4? Nothing wrong with that of course, my fanfic was partially inspired by New Vegas... only without Vegas.
7036523
Nice eye. Indeed, I mas tremendously inspired by Fallout 4. In fact, the announcement of Fallout 4 spurred my to write this story. But, those inspirations are about where it stops. The rest of my story is going to be completely unique. I hope you enjoy it.
As for your story. I definitely noticed that it was based off of New Vegas. You aren't exactly subtle about it. But hey, to each their own. After all, I find your story completely enjoyable.
In fact, our stories take place at nearly the same time. Mine three years after the events of FoE, Yours five years. I also plan to have my story take place on a long stretch of time (3-5 years) Which means my story will be quite long. And if you don't have a problem against it, there's something I've always wanted to do. Wanna do a combination chapter?
7036584 Yeah, the use of the NCR and the Crimson Empire conflict drawing comparisons to the NCR and Caesar's Legion probably was a dead giveaway.
I'd love to sometime, sure.
FaultyScrewdriver
Just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I enjoy your story so far.
You ALMOST lost me when the Overmare agreed to use the Stable door to repair the water purifier.... personally, I just couldn't believe that decision was actually made... I mean, what sane pony would voluntarily destroy the only thing keeping the supposedly dangerous outside world outside.....
However, I suspended my disbelief, kept reading, and am now enjoying the characters and the plot so far, so you definitely grabbed my attention. Keep it up!
Alright, back to editing my story and planning out the few chapters for me!
7040318
I appreciate you enjoying my story. I actually have a counter argument to your reasoning, but as I don't want to anger you and lose you as a faithful reader, it will not be presented forth.
Furthermore, the missing Stable door will bring some interesting plot points into the future, trust me. And when those times do come, I hope you very much enjoy them.
So again, thank you for the positive comments, and personal feedback.
7040342
You don't have to worry about angering me.... maybe before I tried writing my own story I would get angry about it.. but now I know that sometimes there is more to it.
If you don't mind sharing it in public, I am quite interested in hearing the counter argument... it may help me to see what the thought process was... if you want to PM is, you can do that as well.
Anyway, keep it up!