I must say I like this story and where it's going, very few FO:E stories use tribals or tribes, and I love how this story deals with the "fallout" of the original story,. This route 117 sounds like a refreshing idea of a story, not to mention I love the idea of characters quest to be to guard ponies as they make their way across the route. Keep it up I like to see where it goes.

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Hmm, interesting You have my attention