Reminds me of that one episode of Fist of the North Star, only this ended in hilarity instead of a massive behemoth stomping someone's head in. Wasn't expecting that.

6281194 Well you know how I feel about FOTNS haha. I was actually even gonna call him something derived from "Devil's rebirth" but I couldn't think of anything so I just left him unnamed

6306659 Glad you're enjoying the story and glad you like Skitz! I've tried to write her the best I can, she's the hardest character to write. More is on the way! Eventually.

Thought it was gonna be a crossover with Syn xD what a heel turn

6529424 I have never seen the number 23.

6547300 I hope you do check out the rest. I hope to get back to writing it soon, just been working through some things. As for the fight scenes, like the rest of the story they're intentionally silly. Im also a former martial artist, its hard to make ponies fight realistically so I don't really try haha

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

6590003 Thank you very much. I appreciate that

Read the story thus far, I like it. The flashback parts are pretty okay but unless this story is ending soon you might want to be careful about showing us all the aspects of the story too soon.

6839289 I got a plan for what I'm doing with the flashbacks so rest easy. Glad you're liking the story thus far. It's killing me that I have been unable to write as much as I want too. My life is very chaotic right now, but in a good way. I got promoted at my job which means it takes up even more of my time now and what not. I am determined to finish what I started! I just can't give a precise when just yet.

I'm on chapter one so far, and I have to say

NICE!

having read (and re-read) each capter i have to say if and when it comes i looks forward to the next chapter. i find myself smiling at the groups antics and yet feeling a lot more about them. it surpasses simple levels of comedy and finds something a lot deeper than that. fundamentaly i must say that this i hold as one of my personal favourite fallout equestria stories.