• Published 15th Mar 2015
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Fallout Equestria: New Starts (Rewritten) - Sir_Scrub_aka_QuickDraw



The story of Black Rose, now known as "QuickDraw" a self given name after he leaves his stable into the wasteland.

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Chapter One: Intro (Revised and Rewritten)

"War, war never changes. The only thing that changes it the hooves which hold the weapons of war. Whether that be sticks, spears, rifles or a button to detonate a mega spell. War will never change. It is something that is natural in ponies. So is friend-ship. So why did war prevail over ponies good nature ?"

To give you a clear story. We must start from home, Stable 40. From what I have learned it was much larger then normal stables. So was it's stockpile of pre-war weapons and gear while being under-stocked in Pip-bucks, chems and healing potions.This is only part of my story, things that shaped my life before I was even born were brewing in our stable.

Things started before, long ago with Blooming Rose, First Sergeant in the Equestrian army. His line of decedents leading up to me, carrying on the Rose family name. Fast forward about two hundred years give or take a few years. Some tensions were growing. Unlike some jobs in the stable. Overmare is passed from Mother to Daughter. No expectations. If she kept having colts, then she couldn't resign until she had a filly. While a majority of these Overmares were fine. The last two generations were getting more power hungry more so then the past Overmares.

This lead the Birth of the rebel cause, Now taking down the overmare would simply be a temporary solution. Blood Rose my father was going to see to that he would lead this Stable to peace once again. But absolute power corrupts. Lets take a look back into history Princess Luna, Intentions were well meant after Cealista resigned. But more and more Black Ops were conducted on zebra soil, more and more projects were conducted with out a pony being the wiser look where we ended up blown up beyond nonrecognition. Forced under ground like rats into the sewer. I had suspicions he wasn't just going to make peace in the stable, be they wouldn't ever be confirmed after his execution. Which lead to my rise to power in the rebel cause being his next of kin. This could of easily started a civil war among the Resistance not ever pony agreed with me. Nor would I have expected them to.

This is my story, my journey through a new world. Where I've done good things, bad things. What is good or bad ? Do the ends justify the means ? Either way how ever you think whether I'm a monster, hero or neither is completely up to you. -Black Rose "QuickDraw".

Author's Note:

Rewritten. Enjoy.

Feedback on any thing. Think this new rewrite sucks let me know, think its better do that then. Any thing helps me become a better writer.

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