Still waiting to find out about that freaky nightmare involving Crosshair from back at the beginning. Inkwell should maybe try to find out a little more about those he's trusting with his life.
3427949 I haven't actually revealed that yet. The story begins before Littlepip's own story though, definitely within the same year as Littlepip's story.
Nice, Rangers update though I'm a little late on the comments. Hmmm, they can't take ammo out of the facility and that, but is it just the registered rounds or if they make new ammo will our Ranger Snow Squad be able to use them? Hah, I liked the interactions with the Ghouls, I'm surprised by how you swung that, I thought it would be another "Shoot-and-maul them but-lose-you-left-leg-in-the-process" kind of scenario. I don't really get the feeling that Inkwell is really that traumatized by the loss of his contingent. Tesla Coils? That's easy, Old Olneigh (Is that even spelt right?) probably has one. Damn, Inkwell can't last a chapter without his armour getting mangled, at least he can carry a ton of crap with broken armour. STR +2 Still wondering what Mustang's agenda is, but laughs all around. "I'd shoot you and all these maggot infested corpses if it wasn't for this damned combat inhibitor." After a Snowhound all they need is a pet radroach (Frostroach?) and they can have moral support. Bring the wasteland on!
I wish there was a little more explanation into why the ghoul Stable group turned up at that moment after being gone for so long. It comes right out of nowhere. And even though they aren't flesh eating crazy, they seem to be Aperature Science brand crazy. And why IS the griffon so preserved?
So a nightmare moon figurine has appeared. Why is that significant? And Inkwell is being villinous. At first I thought it was a joke, but he was way too serious about it at the end. Explain please!
3562349 All in due time, where's the fun in revealing everything at once? These things will be explained in later chapters, no not the next chapter, but definitely in the future. As for when Chapter 9 is coming out, hopefully in December, but I make no promises. I'm under quite a bit of pressure currently.
3563131 okay, I will wait to see what happens. I was mainly confused with the ghoul scientists because their sudden unexplained appearance being able to solve a lot of potential problems felt like a deus ex machina. (You know what that is, right?)
3847732 I will when I have the chance :) keep up the great job with this I love seeing the story through the eyes of a pony that is not the best at combat :)
I didn't wan to say first, buuuut... Since I'm here, amirite..? THIRD~! LOL
Still waiting to find out about that freaky nightmare involving Crosshair from back at the beginning. Inkwell should maybe try to find out a little more about those he's trusting with his life.
When is the story set in relation to Little Pip's story?
3427949 I haven't actually revealed that yet. The story begins before Littlepip's own story though, definitely within the same year as Littlepip's story.
Nice, Rangers update though I'm a little late on the comments.
Hmmm, they can't take ammo out of the facility and that, but is it just the registered rounds or if they make new ammo will our Ranger Snow Squad be able to use them?
Hah, I liked the interactions with the Ghouls, I'm surprised by how you swung that, I thought it would be another "Shoot-and-maul them but-lose-you-left-leg-in-the-process" kind of scenario.
I don't really get the feeling that Inkwell is really that traumatized by the loss of his contingent.
Tesla Coils? That's easy, Old Olneigh (Is that even spelt right?) probably has one.
Damn, Inkwell can't last a chapter without his armour getting mangled, at least he can carry a ton of crap with broken armour. STR +2
Still wondering what Mustang's agenda is, but laughs all around. "I'd shoot you and all these maggot infested corpses if it wasn't for this damned combat inhibitor."
After a Snowhound all they need is a pet radroach (Frostroach?) and they can have moral support. Bring the wasteland on!
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter, it's these kind of comments that encourage me to keep writing. Thanks for the comments and speculations =).
Yeeeeeah buddy, new chapter up in da house! So good to have you back!
Awesome work can patiently wait for more.
Love the main character basically losing it then passing out.
I wish there was a little more explanation into why the ghoul Stable group turned up at that moment after being gone for so long. It comes right out of nowhere.
And even though they aren't flesh eating crazy, they seem to be Aperature Science brand crazy. And why IS the griffon so preserved?
So a nightmare moon figurine has appeared. Why is that significant?
And Inkwell is being villinous. At first I thought it was a joke, but he was way too serious about it at the end.
Explain please!
3562349 All in due time, where's the fun in revealing everything at once? These things will be explained in later chapters, no not the next chapter, but definitely in the future. As for when Chapter 9 is coming out, hopefully in December, but I make no promises. I'm under quite a bit of pressure currently.
3563131 okay, I will wait to see what happens. I was mainly confused with the ghoul scientists because their sudden unexplained appearance being able to solve a lot of potential problems felt like a deus ex machina. (You know what that is, right?)
3563638 Yes I know what a Deus Ex Machina is.
3566056 Okay. I am really looking foreword to the next chapter!
I was wondering if I could make an audiobook of your story?
3736520 Sure, you can. Just link me to it when you're done. Are you working on it solo or with a few friends?
LOVE THIS STORY
3847732 I will when I have the chance :) keep up the great job with this I love seeing the story through the eyes of a pony that is not the best at combat :)
I think I'm in love with this story.
>Old World Blues scientists
>2gud