Jack said "Apparently, some sort of evil force revived him and he quickly got back to work in order to return to power. He tried to take over the world again by starting in the Kingdom of Arendelle, but all of us put a quick stop to it before he could do serious damage. However, that was not the end of it. He decided it would be a good idea to invade my wedding when I was supposed to get married to my wife Elsa and he made sure to get a big head start before any of us could respond. It didn't help that people were in a massive panic because Pitch feeds off of fear and that causes us to lose our powers over time. It scared poor Elsa to death and what makes me the most angry is that he did it as a way to get revenge because I told him that he would always be part of the darkness which is true, but he didn't seem to view it that way."
Another question; You do realize that Frozen and Rise of the Guardians are in two different time frames? The Frozen setting seems to be in the 1800's ( 19th century. ), while the holiday guardian's adventures from the movie is in modern day ( 21st century. ).
So, how does that work? How do they all somehow meet each other in the first place? Do they use a dimensional portal that goes back in time!?
And I DOUBT that Arendalle still "exist" in modern day!?
Next Chapter: The return to New York! After gathering evidence on the Pony of Shadows and Pitch's location, the group tries to plan their next course of action. But the live map alerts of them of their location and they quickly go after them. However, when they are chasing them, they end up in New York City and they must figure out how to get out of there. Will they be able to find their way through NYC or will the Big Apple leave them stranded with no way out?
Jack sighed and said "After that terrible invasion, we immediately began chasing after him again because there was no way he was going threaten all of our lives and then just get away with it. He had to pay for he did. So, we chased him throughout the world and every time we fought him in a battle, he ended up escaping somehow. What didn't make sense is that he somehow gained the ability to travel through different dimensions and he used that to his advantage. Ranging from a bunch of spaceships in space to a giant lizard and three headed dragon fighting each other in Boston, Pitch eventually found his way to this world and that's how we ended up here."
Knuckles could only sigh and said "That's just great. At least we have somewhat of an idea of what look out for with Pitch. We know that he can gain power from fear and he can now possess the ability of interdimensional travel. Anything else I'm missing?" He also knew that what Jack was talking about was the Galactic Empire in Star Wars and Godzilla and King Ghidorah in Godzilla: King Of The Monsters that had come out earlier this year in May.
Okay, how many more franchises are you gonna put in here?
Not trying to sound rude, but having multiple different franchises in a massive fictional multiversel crossover can be a quite a hassle to pay attention to the humongous story at large.
Not exactly against huge multiverse crossovers like this.
Just find it annoying that you reference these different stories and adventures of the characters you have.
But, you didn't show us to them before. It's the same issue with "Show, Don't Tell" mistake.
So unless you do have the first Frozen and Rise of the Guardians story somewhere? Then I ( And anybody else reading this. ) will don't know what the heck is going on!?
All the Pillars there couldn't believe how much Knuckles' friends stuck up for him and rebuked them for thinking so lowly of him without any regard to his past. But, they believed that his friends were simply brainwashed into the belief that Knuckles was supposed to be the good guy and all of them were the bad ones since they took the Master Diamond from him. They'll eventually learn that Knuckles wasn't all cracked up to be.
Wow! And I thought that only Starswirl is a massive delusional dick!
11484452 The multiverse is a very complicated subject. There are so many different universes that exist and it's just difficult to keep track of all of them. I am aware that the timelines are different, but there may have been outside forces that have changed things around for it to make more sense. That's all I can say about it.
11484455 No, you will not. I only planned for the Frozen and Guardians franchises being in this story. There will be references to other movies, but the characters from those will not be actively involved in this story.
Twilight's blood began to boil at the thought of some prince ditching someone who had blindly loved them without question and leaving her to die with a frozen heart cast by her own sister. It reminded her of Blueblood, but not even he would stoop to such lows. He was incredibly cruel and a royal pain in the ass, but he would not simply leave someone to die for their own selfish gain as part of an evil plan to take over Equestria.
Twilight, I have seen many fanfiction literatures of Blueblood in this site. And sadly for you, those many Blueblood's are just as bad, if not much worse than Prince Hans ever did in the first Frozen movie. So, you are totally dead wrong sadly.
11484459 You would be correct. It's difficult to write a story with so many characters that are actively involved, but I am trying as hard as I can to do the best I can do with this story. I know a lot of the story does not make sense at the moment, but it will make sense in time as more chapters get released. All I ask is that you simply be patient and all of the loose ends will get tied up at the conclusion of the story. I guarantee that is going to happen. I'm going to make it happen.
11484473 I know that Blueblood has done very terrible things before in other fanfictions, but Twilight is completely oblivious to the fact that is the case. She does not know that the internet exists and it is not in her world, so she has no idea that is going on. It might sound like an exercise in futility here, but I wanted to at least give you some context as a way to understand a little bit better.
The two of them did evil laughter and Pitch said "Let the games begin." This would now be a new chapter for the two of them and everyone will soon fear them. So much so that not even Knuckles himself could stop them. Pitch could tell something was different about that character and he was determined to find his weakness. Nothing could ever stop them now. Their glorious reign shall begin and Equestria will fall.
This sounds like you kinda over hyped those two villain's "threat level" a bit too much? I mean, they aren't DC Comics/Marvel, Dragon Ball Z/DB Super, WH40K, or Godzilla/Kaiju's that can annihilate an entire moon, the entire planet, gas giant, sun/star, or even a solar system power level!?
So, their "multiversel conquest" is highly laughable.
11484482 You are right and they are not as powerful as other villains in MLP or other franchises, but there will be some creativity that will be involved here to make them seem more like a threat and to make it more interesting. It just started and they'll get more dangerous over time. You'll see at a later point.
11484591 It's going to not be pretty, I'll say the least. It'll eventually reach a boiling point and then they'll have to decide where to move forward after that.
Another question; You do realize that Frozen and Rise of the Guardians are in two different time frames? The Frozen setting seems to be in the 1800's ( 19th century. ), while the holiday guardian's adventures from the movie is in modern day ( 21st century. ).
So, how does that work? How do they all somehow meet each other in the first place? Do they use a dimensional portal that goes back in time!?
And I DOUBT that Arendalle still "exist" in modern day!?
So, are we gonna see the TMNT next?
Okay, how many more franchises are you gonna put in here?
Not trying to sound rude, but having multiple different franchises in a massive fictional multiversel crossover can be a quite a hassle to pay attention to the humongous story at large.
Not exactly against huge multiverse crossovers like this.
Just find it annoying that you reference these different stories and adventures of the characters you have.
But, you didn't show us to them before. It's the same issue with "Show, Don't Tell" mistake.
So unless you do have the first Frozen and Rise of the Guardians story somewhere? Then I ( And anybody else reading this. ) will don't know what the heck is going on!?
Wow! And I thought that only Starswirl is a massive delusional dick!
11484452
The multiverse is a very complicated subject. There are so many different universes that exist and it's just difficult to keep track of all of them. I am aware that the timelines are different, but there may have been outside forces that have changed things around for it to make more sense. That's all I can say about it.
11484455
No, you will not. I only planned for the Frozen and Guardians franchises being in this story. There will be references to other movies, but the characters from those will not be actively involved in this story.
Twilight, I have seen many fanfiction literatures of Blueblood in this site. And sadly for you, those many Blueblood's are just as bad, if not much worse than Prince Hans ever did in the first Frozen movie. So, you are totally dead wrong sadly.
11484459
You would be correct. It's difficult to write a story with so many characters that are actively involved, but I am trying as hard as I can to do the best I can do with this story. I know a lot of the story does not make sense at the moment, but it will make sense in time as more chapters get released. All I ask is that you simply be patient and all of the loose ends will get tied up at the conclusion of the story. I guarantee that is going to happen. I'm going to make it happen.
11484473
I know that Blueblood has done very terrible things before in other fanfictions, but Twilight is completely oblivious to the fact that is the case. She does not know that the internet exists and it is not in her world, so she has no idea that is going on. It might sound like an exercise in futility here, but I wanted to at least give you some context as a way to understand a little bit better.
This sounds like you kinda over hyped those two villain's "threat level" a bit too much? I mean, they aren't DC Comics/Marvel, Dragon Ball Z/DB Super, WH40K, or Godzilla/Kaiju's that can annihilate an entire moon, the entire planet, gas giant, sun/star, or even a solar system power level!?
So, their "multiversel conquest" is highly laughable.
11484482
You are right and they are not as powerful as other villains in MLP or other franchises, but there will be some creativity that will be involved here to make them seem more like a threat and to make it more interesting. It just started and they'll get more dangerous over time. You'll see at a later point.
I honestly can’t wait to see what happens next, especially with the beef with Knuckles and the Pillars.
11484591
It's going to not be pretty, I'll say the least. It'll eventually reach a boiling point and then they'll have to decide where to move forward after that.
Things have gotten complicated