Repercussions: An Alternate Ending

I know, I know, the story's nowhere nearly done, but a friend of mine volunteered to preread what I had of the first draft over a year ago (I'm sorry), and after reading the first five chapters (revised down to four), I received this in my PMs on Team Liquid:

I vividly recall laughing for at least five minutes, mainly because of the Empire Strikes Back factor of unbeknownst incest. When she finished reading chapter fifteen (now eleven), she went, "Oh God what have I done?"

Priceless.

Comments

[HyperRandomness]

Neat.

[v-invidia]

Oh, so that is how it acutally ended!
also, I guess one might say you're responsible for the direction my art took later, by inspiring that drawing ;3