Side Story Suggestions? · 3:20am May 16th, 2022
So I went through with it, and made the Cloaked Heart side stories, but I have only a few ideas (Equestrian Meal Time being one of the non-canon ones, and Movie Night being one of the canon ones). So, here's your chance to suggest some ideas of what you'd like to see! Canon and Non-Canon ideas are both welcome! Hell, give me What If scenarios (What if Jethro had appeared right before Nightmare Moon)! Or crossovers with other MLP FanFictions (Jethro the Banker meets Shane McDonald the Texas Ranger?)!
Give me suggestions, everypony!
Disclaimer: I might not choose yours, and if I don't please don't be mad
what if all he experience in equestria was all a dream
Maybe a fun little what if chapter with Jethro waking up in the Friendship is Witchcraft universe instead of the one he did?
Maybe we can get Athena’s perspective of things throughout the story. When she first found him, her first moments back to Equestria, her talks with him, her opinions on how things changed for better or worse, and her last thoughts before succumbing to her fate.
Or perhaps her first interaction with humanity back at Greece with the other alicorns and how she overcame her chaos sickness. Maybe also what led her to kill the other alicorns and how.
Maybe a what if showing Athena’s perspective on Jethro’s arrival. Though that one may become really emotional.
Perhaps you can show all the hubbubs after Luna unveiled her anthro form at the Gala? Celestia's reactions to Twilight's letters describing Jethro's movie collection? Ponies' reaction to Jethro behind the scene? Or maybe even some histories that you feel you don't want to explain in the canon?
What if you did one he doesn't know about MLP he ends up falling where is the storm King is the love interest is Tempest shadow
I just wondered why the future history exhibit told his origin story wrong. The story goes zecora met him first and then after the elements misbehave to put mildly the princesses found out about him and how the elements acted. The only thing that was correct was him running from the guards.
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Because he arrived over one thousand years prior, but in the same location where the palace was inhabited.
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Huh? Please elaborate.
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The future exhibit story takes place when Twilight is still a filly. Jethro arrived in Equestria at the same place as in the main story, but not at the same time. He was thrown back a thousand years, before the events of Nightmare Moon.
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He time travel at some point into the past?
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It's a What If story. What if Jethro had appeared a thousand years in the past?
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Oh okay now I get it.
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would like to see a music chapter
maybe readers can send them in
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Music chapter?
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basically a chapter of the ponies that he knows react to human music that Jethro has stored on his computer or phone
said music is sent in by youtube links but just to clarify the readers themselves are not in this fics its music that he may possibly have sorry if my English is not very good
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Oooh. I thought you meant more like a musical chapter, where Ponies break out into song and dance, which wouldn't work since I've established musicals don't happen in my Cloaked Heart-verse.
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if you do decide to do one maybe make a blog post to receive suggestions with youtube links so other readers know what there listening to and for readers to listen to themselves.
also has our resident human given any of the ponies belly rubs
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Might be a bit embarrassing to do. Especially since the mares have exposed teats down there.
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hmmm maybe an ear scratch may be more appropriate for some reason i can picture dashies leg thumbing like a dog
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https://tenor.com/view/thumper-bambi-rabbit-thumping-feet-gif-17832036
Ponies vs video games. Fluttershy with Undertale, Pinkie with Mario, Twilight with anything strategic maybe even RPGs. Spike with RPGs, Rarity might get a kick out of Sims but would moan bout the limited clothing options. Luna, Dash and AJ get into fighting games and becoming game rivals.
How about the talk that Sunset and Celestia had that was slightly mentioned in Chapter 95?
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That’ll definitely happen.
It may sound dark but What if Applejack actually managed to kill Jethro in Chapter 9?