Change of Eros plans... · 3:50pm Apr 25th, 2022
After working on the new Eros chapter for over a week but never finding it easy or enjoyable, I finally figured out why.
I just don’t want to go over the same ground again right now by retelling the last couple chapters from Chris’s perspective; I want to move on to the viewing of Midway that’s been endlessly teased in the main story. I also realized it didn’t make sense to pick up Fortrakt’s perspective for one chapter and then drop it, nor was particularly fair to our favorite birdie boi.
So... I’m starting over. I’ll save what I already wrote for Chris for later, but on to Midway we go, with the story remaining in Fortrakt’s perspective. This next chapter is going to back off the sex in favor of the movie, as even under the influence, there’s a lot for our favorite birbs to take in. It’ll still end in sex, though, especially as they see the SBD Dauntless dive bombers attacking through a hail of fire to strike down the Japanese carriers. And you can bet I’m planning an analogous scene for the main story.
Unfortunately, this will mean a delay in posting the new chapter. You have my apologies for that, but hopefully the final result will be worth it. I’ll aim to have it draft complete this weekend and go live a couple days after that.
If what you were doing wasn't working for you, its better to do something else than keep banging your head against the wall even it means that it will take longer.
Good luck, Sensei!
Honestly sounds great!
take your time to make it awesome, glad you've figured it out to get back into your writing flow