Story Review #11 · 2:14am Dec 14th, 2021
Story review #11: A Gift To A Princess Holiday’s Heart
—Lonely Fanboy48
Character’s:
Twilight: Classic curious Twilight I enjoyed the fact that story explored her being more curious about the human world because that was something that was criminally overlooked in the movies. Cause honestly she would’ve been more curious then she seemed to be in canon.
All the other characters: They are all fairly in character and seem to be really enjoyable.
Premise: Cute nothing revolutionary or amazing but that’s the point it’s just a cute and short one-shot about Twilight and friends during the holidays.
Punctuation and Grammar: The author has requested I don’t worry about Reviewing this part of the story. I do usually cover this!
Dialogue: Bit blocky but it works.
Story moments and feels: (Requested by author.)
It had quite a few wholesome moments. It reminded me of a hallmark movie simple, to the point, heartwarming, and short. Overall the moments were pretty okay 👍
Flaws: As stated it’s a bit simple and could use more flushing out but it’s still a decent story.
Strengths: The initial premise I love the idea of Twilight being curious about the human world and their holiday traditions.
Rating: 
5/10 Embarrassed Twilights
Story link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448184/a-gift-to-a-princess-holidays-heart
Next review: A Hearth’s Warming Mess
Thanks for the review.
5616830
You’re welcome
I gotta read this.
5617223
It is a cute one off story