Lesson Ideas · 9:48am Nov 28th, 2021
Hey, I'm not dead!
So, progress with "Lessons From Ponyville" isn't going as smoothly as I'd hoped. The next chapter, which was supposed to be about Deagus learning to laugh at himself, didn't turn out how I wanted, so I had to scrap it. But I put so much effort into trying to write it that I'm kinda burnt of ideas.
I need some help with writing the next few chapters. So if anyone's willing to give me some ideas, I'm all ears! (You will, of course, be credited in the story)
The basic concepts for the next few chapters are as follows:
11. Thorax learns to have a backbone from Chrysalis and Mothra.
12. Applejack and Mandy celebrate their first Hearth's Warming together.
13. Shining Armor and Mandy talk out their differences.
14. Pharynx spends a weekend with Fluttershy in order to learn empathy.
15. Twilight Sparkle enlists Sunset Shimmer's help in dealing with Chrysalis's attitude.
Ooh! I can help with 14!
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Alright, whatcha got?
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Pharynx being harassed by Angel, Fluttershy making him feed her animals, and Phar getting frustrated and yelling at her, only for her to forgive him
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Those are some pretty good ideas. I think I'm starting to form a plotline in my head already; thank you!
(And, of course, you'll be credited in the story)
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No problem! Glad I could help!