Chapter 1 rework is now finished · 1:08am Nov 25th, 2021
Managed to knockout rewriting both the prologue and the first chapter
well, less a rewrite and more me diving into the guts of the chapters and doing a series of much needed fixes and ironing out of the worst offenders in pacing and dragging on and "nothing is happening" situations.
trimmed the worst of the fat, removed some largely redundant dialogue and idle contemplations that just came across as me spinning my tires.
the pacing should be a lot nicer and the flow muuuch smoother in this version.
all in all, the prologue and chapter one are still the same, just, "Better"
feel free to offer your critique on the improvements.