Prologue rework is a go · 10:13pm Nov 24th, 2021
Finally made the time to fix up the prologue to be less crappy, utilizing my improved experience in writing and made the flow a lot better.
added in some details, put in some foreshadowing, etc.
gave better insight into his thought process, the prologue is still not great, but it is leagues better than what it used to be, I think.
give it a read if you want, lemme know what you think!