Nerfing Cobalt Steel

I have decided to cancel the story and do a re write. But I won't do it until im done with at least one of my other stories. TY for understanding.

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[SUPERETHAN2]

He still seems too OP to me. Let's see teleportation not only for him but he can also summon others, mind control like he did on Zephyr, Muting someone just to name a few. During his first conflict with the girls the first two would have easily gotten him out of it. Teleport pass Rarity's barrier or use the ability he did on Zephyr to not only have her remove it, but to get the girls to leave him alone about his powers. Seeing him easily deal with everyone else with his powers, but fail against the girls despite having at least two abilities that would allow him to, don't make the girls seem more powerful or skilled, it makes him look like an idiot in a completely forced way. While it's good you are considering nerfing him so there would be conflict, the fic itself really needs a major rewrite for it to make more sense.