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  • 10 weeks
    Story help

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    Please say that you'll help me with my story.

    2 comments · 226 views
  • 15 weeks
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  • 15 weeks
    Epic Mickey Repainted

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  • 15 weeks
    My Ninjago stories in a different site

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  • 15 weeks
    Mlp Ninja-Go Rewritten, not, or canceled?

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Nov
14th
2021

Help · 5:10am Nov 14th, 2021

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/505143/kamen-rider-saber-eg-volume-1

This is my story and I'm in need of a editor. Someone in my post suggested it. So I'm taking that poster's suggestion and I'm asking for an editor.

If an editor sees this, please send me a message.

Comments ( 5 )

Hello your sorry is a nice idea and I like it a lot so liked to help. Although I'm not an English professor nor do I have an English degree. I like to help but we have worked out a schedule so I can do homework while helping you.

Here is what I spotted in the first two paragraphs:
"We open to a small house on a hill and when going inside we see an odd-looking man humming to the tune. This man had green hair with a pink hat on his head, he dress real fancy and had a birds nest on his shoulder. When he turned he noticed you reading this story and smile

"Ah, well hello there." Said the man. "You must be wondering who I am? Well, my name is Tassel and I guess you can say I'm a storyteller. And this is a story about a girl and her friends, along with a young man with blue hair, are about to take an adventure of a lifetime.'"

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Hey, I fixed the things you pointed out

I'm not sure if this is still relevant, but since I don't see you crediting anyone for editing, I guess you still haven't found anyone willing to edit the whole thing. Remember that blogs in general see very little traffic, so if you want to make sure that you find an editor (ideally a good and skilled editor), then make sure to ask around in editor groups, such as this one. Also, it's good to ask the potential editors for some manner of reference so that you have proof they won't make your story worse. :raritywink:

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