A New Home Segment 1

Greetings and salutations, my name is Wrex and this is my review. Get ready for a tear-jerker of a story, it's 'A New Home' and 'Life in Equestria: Holidays with Toby'. In this story, Fluttershy becomes the adoptive mother to a broken child. I'll be honest, the first time I read this, I went through a lot of tissue paper. But it was enjoyable and very hopeful. This story shows that jealousy is just as poisonous as rage or alcohol, that which is broken can be mended only by love, and saying goodbye can grant some matter of solice. Aside from some grammatical errors, this is story worth reading. Though, I would recommend some tissue paper. I give this story a 9.5 out of 10.