Focusing on editing

I've done gone and run outta ideas, so i'll focus on editing my horrifying first few chapters in the meantime.

Expect delays on the next chapters.

Churchill and Franklin will come in around 2~3 chapters probably. I'm still working & brainstorming on the background and the worldbuilding.

Comments

[ShadowShip]

I mean, we could have a intermediate time skip to Rommel explaining the past 40+ years to Bismarck for a whole chapter and then cut back to the regular stuff. I'm sure the time when you go back to Bismarck his mind would be utterly wrecked from the info dump he just got about what happened to his world and compare how this one is to it.

[Pogmin]

Eh, you got a lot you can do with Celestia and Luna somehow coming into power, as well as the rest of The World's general reaction to the griffons(The Zebra tribes in particular). With the Changelings coming up too, the fact that they're pretty much just legends right now would make their debut to the test of the countries very shocking(Especially to the Crystal Empire, suddenly having a neighbor on top of everything else they're dealing with is like throwing gas on an electric fire).

[CrimsonS4ge]

Please make the changelings eventually ally with the Griffins to make a human lead world conquering coalition.

[MadhatterZack]

That's ok mein friend everyone has a hard time comin up with ideas heck your going to have more in de future so take your time.Also you can ask your readers for suggestions like ShadowShip , CrimsonR4ge and Pogmin.
Personally I think you should make it so that the changelings have their own mother tongue so that o'le Churchill and FDR can recognise each other and don't get me started on de hive mind structure.
You can make it so that they are both Changeling Kings and they help unite all the Hives and Queens under their banner and make it so there are 6 hives with Queens (3 wives each)and lets say the Allies Hive is the only one with Changeling Kings , throw in a prophecy of changeling unity and you got yer self a nice set of chapters and you can make them a constitutional monarchy with elected positions like the Uk ,but with the Monarchs having a little bit more power ,not enough to unbalance the scales but enough to influence certain decisions.
Again its just a suggestion.