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  • 8 weeks
    Cancelling The Enchanted Carousel, restarting as a new story

    Hi all!

    I've already made the announcement in other places, so I figured I might as well do it here, too, to cement the change.

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    23 comments · 1,485 views
  • 9 weeks
    Hiatus on Story + Thoughts

    Hi all!

    Just letting you know this story will be hiatus'd for a bit.

    Not because I'm not writing anymore, but because life got in the way so I wasn't able to finish it all in a fugue state as I wanted, and the reality is right now... I am not in the headspace necessary to write it.

    Though, since I'm not doing that, I do at least want to talk about it.

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    23 comments · 1,023 views
  • 12 weeks
    Okay, here we go.

    As some folks may know or have seen, I'm currently working on a story that is very important to me. It is still not finished, and will likely be updating in the next following days because I want to write it and get it done in one go.

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  • 23 weeks
    Quick Note re: contacting me!

    Hi all!

    I hope you're doing well.

    I've been meaning to say this for a while, but keep forgetting because my life has been a dumpster fire for the past year, but I did post a fic today so now's a good time as any!

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  • 32 weeks
    Re-uploaded Someone To Hold On To as a complete oneshot

    Hello!

    Just wanted to get ahead of any confusion for anyone following this story to say that I ended up doing a speedrun of the entire thing and then deleted the old chapters and just posted the entire complete story as a new chapter.

    That was it.

    I hope you have been well!

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Aug
20th
2021

THE GREAT BIG ENCHANTED SERIES RECAP + Q&A? · 10:35pm Aug 20th, 2021

Hiii everyone!

A reader sent me a PM earlier asking if I planned on doing a recap for the series because of the big hiatus, and the answer is YES AND HERE IT IS!

Enchanted Carousel is nearly ready to update soon (...again...) so I think this is a good time to give everyone a refresher and answer any questions y'all might have.


IMPORTANT POINTS TO KEEP IN MIND FROM TEL/TEK [GDOCS VERSION]

  • MONO HOW DID WE GET HERE 

    • Once upon a time, discord and the changelings fucked up equestria and the princesses were like

      • Stop that
    • So they defeated the changelings and they tried to defeat discord but they didnt have the elements 
    • Celestia was like “lets have twilight trick him into thinking we can defeat them”, twilight was like “let’s not”

      • They did it anyway

        • This was widely regarded as a bad move
    • They tricked him, he believed them, and he started reforming and befriended twilight

      • Ponies were shitty to discord, which to be fair he was a jerk to them
      • Twilight genuinely befriended discord and he liked her back
    • Discord finds out what happened and hes like I WILL SMIIITE YOU

      • AND ESPECIALLY U TWILIGHT FOR BETRAYING ME

        • FUCK YOU
    • He traps the princesses all over equestria and then, so the legend goes, he leaves all “yoloooo” 
    • A THOUSAND YEARS LATER
    • Rarity finds twilight, shes like, oh shit darling let me help u
    • Twilights like

      • No

        • But all emo and dramatically
    • Rarity helps her anyway
    • Discord, disguised as a book bringer, is like GO FIIIIND THE LOST BOOKS TO FREEEEE HER!!

      • We later find out they didn’t need the books for anything???

        • We dont know why discord lied about it????
    • Rarity goes on a quest to find the books, she finds some of them

      • She meets luna, and the rest of the mane six and spike and im not recapping all of that
    • Meanwhile twilight is all

      • Ah fudge i think i love her???
      • But shes also super traumatized by what happened  so she cant deal with this right now
      • Oh also they have cool love communication necklaces
      • Anyway
    • At some point they meet the dragons

      • Theyre pissed at ponies bc discord was a jerk to spike

        • This will be relevant in carousel so remember this
    • Halfway thru her bookquest, rarity gets cadance’s curse and she can’t find the library
    • She has a big meltdown about it
    • Meets with princess luna who tells her about what happened in the past
    • They figure out hollow shades is full off bad magic
    • They break the curse
    • They go see princess denza
    • They find out princess denza is actually cadance
    • Twilight loses it

      • Like really loses it, she blue screen of deaths, its really bad,
      • She's also deathly afraid of losing rarity and of the pain of it, and
      • OH MAN

        • In the original draft, i was gonna have this super oof line where rarity’s like “but twilight this isnt like you, i know you” 
        • And then twilight was going to be all “KNOW ME? YOU DONT KNOW ME. I’VE BEEN ALIVE FOR A THOUSAND YEARS, AND YOU THINK YOU KNOW ME??? YOU’RE NOTHING BUT A SECOND. GONE BEFORE I BLINK, YOU DONT FUCKING KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME, YOU ARE NOTHING” 
        • It was going to be devastating
        • Anyway
      • She goes all chaos and evil and traps herself in the library BC SHE WAS TRAPPING HERSELF ALL ALLLOOOOOONG!!
      • Then we have a 2 year time skip and she realizes she hates this so she frees herself and reunites with rarity

        AND THAT’S TEL

        NOW FOR TEK

      • Ok so we pick up with twilight freed
      • Everything is great

        • Except for the fact that rarity is absolutely fucked up by what happened at the end of TEL
        • This will be relevant later
      • They go see Cadance and they write to Celestia
      • Celestia is all like

        • Go save luna!!!
      • So they go do that
      • Then what was supposed to be a ten chapter arc BECAME AN ENTIRE GODDAMN BOOK I HATE THIS
      • They go through this whole plot of saving Luna via dreams

        • Im not recapping that its too much but basically it works and its fine and they save her
      • Rarity and Twilight have issues the entire book

        • Twilights trauma made her be not great in TEL, and she hurt rarity, so now she has to deal with it
        • Rarity is too afraid to confront her
        • They end up going to trottingham for a thing and they meet a librarian dude
        • Hes relevant bc later rarity ends up having a dream where she cheats on Twilight with him
        • Twilight sees it and is like rarity what the fuck you dont love me??
        • We find out that its more like rarity is just like

          • REALLY fucked up by the fact that twilight can explode/lose herself and spiral at a moment’s notice
        • Later on we also find out that rarity is so terrified of losing twilight again or twilight dying that she’s willing to die in her place

          • Im sure she wouldnt really tho c: 
        • We have a big raritwi dramatic conversation about it where twis like I WILL GET BETTER AND BE THE PONY U DESERVE ;_; 
        • Its very emotional, and we all cried
        • Eventually they do and their relationship is all the stronger for it
      • THE ELEMENTS

        • Another plot point of TEK is the elements of harmony
        • We see them bond to some of the m6
        • Twilight is like oh shit!!! We need to figure that out!!
        • When luna is freed, pinkie gets her element
      • LUNA

        • Ok so i said i wouldnt recap but MAN
        • That part where luna is like no one believes in me ;_; and pinkie is like I DO!!!! ;__;
        • And then everyone in town comes together to help luna and luna’s like oh my god what have i done how can u forgive me
        • And twis like “princess we already have” 
        • GOD IM CRYING JUST THINKING ABOUT IT
        • And THEN WHEN PINKIE IS LIKE “princess, u have to get out… i really want to meet you… don’t you want to meet me too?” 
        • AND THEN THE CUPCAKE SCENE
        • WAAAAAAH
      • Anyway 
      • they free luna, raritwi is fine, and rarity is like I NEED A VACATION FOR ONE WEEK AT LEAST

        AND THATS THAT

  • WHAT NOW!!

    • They need to

      • Find the elements
      • Save celestia
      • Save cadance
      • Defeat discord
      • Also rarity gets a vacation
  • EXTRA INFO!!!!
  • DISCORD

    • Last we saw of Discord himself was in the end of TEL
    • Discord’s magic is spread all over Equestria; it was recently purged from Hollow Shades (TEK)
    • As of now, we have no idea where he is or what’s his deal
    • We dont know why he made rarity help twilight or why he lied about the books freeing twilight
    • Allegedly he at one point tried convincing twilight she could leave whenever (this was proven to be true)
  • LUNA

    • Luna has been freed (as of TEK ending)
  • TWILIGHT

    • Twilight is free
    • She dealt with most of her trauma in TEK
    • That’s probably it
  • CADANCE

    • Cadance is ghost
    • Cadance is not bound to Canterlot Castle, as explained in TEK’s earlier chapters
    • As of writing this, we do not know how to free her
  • CELESTIA

    • As of writing this, we do not know where Celestia is, and the last sighting of her was when that painter dude found her and was like “dude you look like hell” and she was like “lmao” 

      • She wasn’t like that but spiritually, she was
    • The last time anyone spoke to her was when she sent Spike that one dramatic letter all “THERE IS NO HOOOOPE FOR US!!” and when she told Twilight to go help Luna
  • NORTH RIDGE!!

    • Sometime in the future, Rarity is travelling away from twilight
    • We don’t know why
    • Apparently she’s been declared missing
    • Might involve discord???
    • Who knows!!!
    • For more info on north, there’s a sidestory called North Ridge’s Debt
  • EXTRA POINTS!!

    • Uhhhhhh???
    • Spike and cadance are friends again
    • The owls had babies
    • The plan rn is to go to ponyville??
    • Idk i think ive mostly touched the bigger points of the story so hopefully this was helpful
    • mwaaaa
Comments ( 23 )

Or TLDR: The power of horse lesbians will save the world. (And also friendship)

dont forget this has a group for anyone wanting to see the fics in order and all together :raritywink:

Honestly this kind of writing should be recognized as its own style of art

Working title:
Lesbian Horses Fix Everything

Somewhere the Bodyguard AU is sobbing quietly, totally forgotten...

5571847
Hmm funny you should mention that....

5571847
it's funny you say that because it just won the poll in my patreon server over what story should I update next LOL

I'm gonna work on getting that out this week followed by TEC

This Cliff Notes version of TEL/TEK is amazing - thank you for the review notes Prof Mono!

5571949
Mono does give excellent condensed versions of her stories!

Oh good, I have a workable format for covering all of the Oversaturated World in a single, easy-to-process summary.

Other recaps of TEK:

  • TEK Update + Recap (also linked in the A/N or header at the beginning of Act II, Chapters 13 and 14)

Ok so there's a 100% chance I'm just dumb but I still am not entirely clear on HOW they tricked discord and why he decided to still be evil.

5572057
they said they had all the elements so they could turn him to stone if he didn't reform (but they didn't), and he found out they lied so that pissed him off

5571847
Hey , now.


And nice summary, Mono! TEL books are on my bedside table and I’m hoping they don’t make me stay up all night like my first time through it.

Only you, Mono, can make a recap seem so random but make so much sense.

I wish I could put likes on blog posts.

How I missed this. Welcome back, Mono.

Rarity finds twilight, shes like, oh shit darling let me help u

Call the priest.
This is not supposed to be read at 3am.

Then what was supposed to be a ten chapter arc BECAME AN ENTIRE GODDAMN BOOK I HATE THIS

Nahnah, this is good :scootangel:

  • AND THEN THE CUPCAKE SCENE

I cannot believe a 5-word bullet point made me cry

I think Discord freed Twilight, but I might have forgotten some parts.
Also, how is the recap so positive, while half of the story is negative?
Great Job with the enthusiasm.

This sound like Rainbow has written it.^^

  • In the original draft, i was gonna have this super oof line where rarity’s like “but twilight this isnt like you, i know you”
  • And then twilight was going to be all “KNOW ME? YOU DONT KNOW ME. I’VE BEEN ALIVE FOR A THOUSAND YEARS, AND YOU THINK YOU KNOW ME??? YOU’RE NOTHING BUT A SECOND. GONE BEFORE I BLINK, YOU DONT FUCKING KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME, YOU ARE NOTHING”
  • It was going to be devastating

This was definitely an oof, even if it never made it in the final draft.

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