Story review: #28 The Sun and the Star —by General Alduin
Characters:
Sunset Shimmer: I really like the way you highlight who Sunset is in this story it feels very organic. And I appreciate the amount of characterization we get for her in such a short run-time.
Starlight Glimmer: This alternate human version of Starlight is interesting….
Story Review #24 A Shimmering Heartbreak —by Spyder27
Reward for winning a competition in the Sunset X Villain competition group and a continuation of the previous story I reviewed making this the logical next step plus I kinda wanted to see where this went.
5546535 I understand that life can and is very stressful sometimes hang in there and if you want a friend to talk to I'm more then happy to be your friend.
Good.
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Glad to hear it
Alright
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Glad to hear it
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Is anything wrong or is it just life being alright?
How's it going Reactception? I'm as well as I can be.
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Life being alright.
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I’m doing pretty good.
Life is stressful but great.
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I understand that life can and is very stressful sometimes hang in there and if you want a friend to talk to I'm more then happy to be your friend.
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Thanks for that I’ll let you know if I ever need to talk