Regarding the mistakes · 12:30pm Feb 18th, 2012
since many readers outlined their discontent about the spelling and grammar mistakes in my story i now have it corrected by slashe720.
Big ups to him at this point.
Oh and btw i started to write a short story about Lyra wandering around in Ponyville. I'm not exactly sure where i'm going to go with this but its defenitely not going to be a clopfic. Consider it self-discovery in termsof writing stories.
Slashe is a cool guy, I know of him. Great to see the improvements!
is nice that you correct the grammar
to me, thats the minor problem of all in the storys, but is good have good grammar
I don't really have to say anything, the above two pretty much said it for me.
I hope to see more of your work, and hope even more it's as good as your first fic. (Note: Don't stay at the bar, always try and raise it)