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Live at peace with all men, and carry a long sword that all men may live at peace with you.

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    You wanna hear about a case I should have never taken? It all started when this couple walked into my office with a problem. It seemed fairly easy and straightforward, until they told me what they were hiding...
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  • 118 weeks
    Backstory: A Lesson in Kindness

    I don't have much to say today... [There is a collective gasp, and two readers faint] So, this entry will be rather short. [Cheers and applause ring out]

    Anyway... moving on.

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  • 123 weeks
    Backstory: Little Filly Lost

    First, some context. The Dark Steel series is a spin off from The Quicksilver Chronicles. The private investigator Dark Steel is first mentioned in chapter 3 of One Of Us where he helps Quicksilver and Misty find a lost friend. Those events are retold from Steel's point of view in

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  • 131 weeks
    Backstory: The Painless Murders

    In the story One of Us I introduce a private detective, Dark Steel, that Quicksilver and Misty hire to help them find Tinker Cob. He was a fun character, but didn't get nearly enough screen-time. So I decided to tell the story of the search for Tinker from his point-of-view. That story because

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  • 135 weeks
    Backstory: The Alchemist, part 2

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  • 136 weeks
    Backstory: The Alchemist, part 1

    The genesis of this story goes back to 2016, long before I'd ever watched the first episode of FiM (early 2020). At that time, I saw a piece of artwork showing a wizard walking. That's it. Just walking with his staff and a cape billowing out behind him. Something about that image inspired me to figure out who he was and why he was in a rush to get somewhere. So I started writing. I stopped

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May
27th
2021

Backstory: Dark Steel · 3:18am May 27th, 2021

Dark Steel was the last story written in the original Quicksilver Chronicles series. I'd finished the big ending story and was thinking about what to do next. It occurred to me that I'd introduced a new secondary character in chapter 3 of One of Us, the private investigator Dark Steel who aided Quicksilver and Misty in their search for Tinker Cob. He was only in the story for a couple of scenes, and we didn't see any of what he did to try and find Tinker. I wondered what the search would have been like from his perspective. So I wrote it.

When I was done, I thought: this is a classic detective tale, it should be written as one. I copy/pasted the story into a new doc and edit it from third-person into first-person. Additional internal dialog was added turning it into the general story/film Noir style. This makes it a totally different type of story from any of the others in the series.

One big problem was how much content from One of Us to duplicate in Dark Steel. The scenes when Quicksilver and Misty hire him, and when he reports his findings are obviously the same in both stories. But I didn't want to directly duplicate those scenes in the new story as it would be too much copied content. So it became a balancing act as to just how much to duplicate, and how it would be altered as viewed from Dark Steel's perspective. The result works, but has increased the importance of reading the prequel first to fully understand the context of his search for Tinker.

Of additional note is that some five months later, I returned to Dark Steel again. He now has two more stories in the editing queue making him an official spin-off series from The Quicksilver Chronicles. We'll have to wait and see if any additional stories reveal themselves in the future.

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You wanna hear about a case I should have never taken? It all started when this couple walked into my office with a problem. It seemed fairly easy and straightforward, until they told me what they were hiding...
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