Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.
So my fix has worked but it looks terrible XD when I get home I can be more accurate with it to make it not terrible
Looks great
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looking good, Jolyne. Feeling well?
I liked the previous Avatar better... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯