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  • 171 weeks
    i finally figured what pisses me off about so many anon-a-miss stories

    so i was trying to articulate some of my thoughts while working on new chapter of the room is on fire, and i think i finally understand why so much of the response to anon-a-miss annoys me. don't get me wrong, i can appreciate many of the stories that have resulted from it, but the problem for me is trying to fit that

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  • 174 weeks
    on sunset's transformation

    The biggest mistake that EqG made was not making Sunset's demon form an eldritch horror. I know it's a kid's show, but the fact that they didn't show how horrifying the transformation was/could have been (outside of like her tears evaporating away as she transformed) really made Sunset's heel-face turn at the end of the movie… kind of less believable. Like even Sci-Twi's transformation felt more

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Jan
7th
2021

on sunset's transformation · 5:24pm Jan 7th, 2021

The biggest mistake that EqG made was not making Sunset's demon form an eldritch horror. I know it's a kid's show, but the fact that they didn't show how horrifying the transformation was/could have been (outside of like her tears evaporating away as she transformed) really made Sunset's heel-face turn at the end of the movie… kind of less believable. Like even Sci-Twi's transformation felt more horrific? Even though she was painted as a tragic and unintentional antagonist rather than a full-out villain like Sunset was. Like she was screaming and begging people to help her vs Sunset's transformation which just had the Big Magic Things sound effects. It gave off a kind of "wow that was quick" vibe to Sunset's apology and stuff.

And regardless! Make Sunset's transformation more horrific!!! Make the eoh seem more like a weapon rather than just. oh yay make-everything-better-light. give the main characters moral dilemmas over the use of the weapon!!!

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On top of that, we barely saw what her transformation could do.

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