Mary Sue Test: Bezier · 8:40pm Nov 25th, 2020
Let’s see if I do this right:
( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( ) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
( ) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
(X) Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character? (Kiiiind of?)
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
(X) Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty? (If you count Pharynx as royalty.)
( ) Are they royalty?
( ) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
( ) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)
( ) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
(X) Your OC's Coat is Black
( ) Your OC has black and red in their design.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet.
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one?
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby (it is the child of either a canonxcanon ship or CanonxOC ship)
Total: 3
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( ) Your OC is a smoker.
( ) Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them (Specify, Subtract 5 points)
( ) Your OC's cutie mark is something lame (like washing cars or something, Subtract 3 points)
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points)
Grand Total: 3. (I think...)
1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top.
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.
Well, who’s up for the test?
I am.
I’ll do it. I’ll post a blog with my results
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Okay, use this.
Ooh, me next!
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How do you do this test?
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You have to put in an “X” in the “( )” for each trait that can be applied to your character.
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Just put in a link to the blank template.
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Okay!
Hmm ok cool
I got -2.
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If I had checked the “Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them” I would’ve gotten the same thing, but I wasn’t sure if negative scores even counted.
I like how most of these things don't apply to the other races in the show and is assuming everybody will make a pony OC.
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That’s true! Maybe that’s why it was harder than it looked. Because Bezzy is a changeling.
So, your... self-insert? Is less than a mary sue?
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If I put in the information correctly, then yes.
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Huh. I guess Starry Night's just incredibly dull.
I got a -2.
My Ocs got a 0 and a 1.
The one was from just being a Bat Pony, lol.
Nice score.
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Thanks. Mine’s a changeling.
I had difficulty doing this because a lot of how I imagined my character is based upon the fact that my style of art tends to add and subtract colors and design elements to already existing species designs. I decided to count it towards my character ‘Mary sure quality’ and it ended up being a seven.
Then I remember that she also had sociopathic tendencies , so that dropped her to a two...
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Interesting!