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Yellowtail


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  • 4 weeks
    PPA Announcement (It’s been a while)

    Okay, so, I had been looking back on Papers Ponies and Attitude… and I’m not gonna lie, to me, it did not age that well. However, I’m still somewhat proud of it. That being said… I want to delete a few chapters. I think one person said it best in the comment section in the last chapter of the second arc: This is a good posit to end. And it was.

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  • 4 weeks
    Waking Up

    I jolt awake as I yell in surprise, sweat pouring down my back and neck as I look around wildly.

    “Oh God, how long have I been asleep for!?” I ask myself as I scramble for my phone. I check the month and see it’s April. “ah… okay, a few months, that’s… not too bad-“ I then see the year. “… Damn, no wonder that nap was so good.”

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  • 82 weeks
    Isolated Room (short vent story. Trigger warning: depressing)

    The walls surrounding me mock in shadowy jeers. I stare at the ceiling in my arm chair, feeling my face slide down more and more as I grow tired. I’m always tired. My shoulders feel disconnected, my muscles are reluctant to move, the constant crawling of invisible insects haunt my skin. A pit sits in my stomach as the mockery of production continues. The days slipped by since I have last slept

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  • 86 weeks
    Questions for Yellow

    I figured it’s been a while since I did a QnA, so I figured why not. Go ahead, ask just about anything! Have fun with it!

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  • 87 weeks
    Short: staying alive

    A silent room is suddenly woken up as a familiar figure walks in. The room is mostly empty, with a desk and chair in one corner. A computer sits on top of the desk, which comes to life from the push a button. With that, the man sits in his chair, and sighs.

    So... it's been a while. Almost ten months. Where have I been? That's a good question.

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Nov
9th
2020

...Kinda wanna reset it- · 5:16pm Nov 9th, 2020

Okay. So, I was thinking about the good monster, and how I had initially had a decent idea. However, due to lack of experience and tact, I fucked it up and I currently think it’s pretty horrible given what I wanted to accomplish and convey. Hell, I want to re-write the entire intro! So, how am I gonna go about it? Well- there are two ways I can immediately think of. Either I delete all the chapters and start back on square one, or I could keep the old ones, and just rewrite from the start.

I want to keep writing it, but I don’t like what I’ve done so far. I want to redo it, remove various elements and put in new ones. Some things will stay the same, but a good bit of it’s gonna change. What do you, the viewer, propose I do?

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Comments ( 4 )

If it’s dookie give it the yeety

Time to recycle the trash

honestly you have a great idea here and I believe that you shouldn't trash everything, but I personally recommend you restart and take your time and make it the way you want it to be use what you had before as reference and make something that in your eyes is better and once you feel its ready put it up so we can enjoy cause I personally loved this story to begin with so no matter what you got this my guy

I do agree on the restart.

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