Alternate Ending for Chapter 29 and Deleted Content. · 1:10am Nov 7th, 2020
I wrote this a while ago while I was writing Chapter 21. I originally thought of having a larger struggle unfold over the crown with the characters tripping over their own twisted perceptions until something large would force them to work together. I debated for a good amount of time about whether I wanted a more climactic and confrontational series of events, but I settled for a more emotional moment that allowed Skeletor to reflect on himself and what the crystal ponies meant to him.
This was written before I reworked the story to have the crystal ponies physically describe Skeletor to the princess. I soon realized that there was one prominent question I needed to ask myself if I wanted to make that work. âIf they tell Cadence that they have conflicting view on what Skeletor is, why the hell wouldnât she ask for a physical description.â So, I had to attack the story with a slightly new direction where they would actually talk to her about Skeletor and not be oddly quiet about him.
I also thought Iâd give you a taste of what we could have expected from a Skeletor Displaced that was actually part of the Displaced Multiverse. There is one more deleted scene that I won't post yet because I'm still playing around with thee idea. I'll post it some day, but if I did it now it may spoil the story and give away a plan I haven't decided to abandon yet. Anyway, thank you all for your continual support. I hope you enjoy the deleted scenes of SMoTE.
Cadence Meets Skeletor. Chapter 29.
Cadence stopped mid-step when the throne room doors opened fully, as her eyes caught a terrifying creature sitting on the Crystal Throne. The first thing she noticed about the creature was his furless blue skin, a perfect sculpture of muscle that rivaled the mightiest of minotaurs that she had met on her travels. She looked down at the creatureâs legs to stare at his hooves, a sign of respect to minotaurs of high authority. However, that was when she noticed that the creature had two large draconic feet that ended in three black claws on each foot, but unlike a dragon his feet and body were completely scale-less.
She looked up to see the face of the new lord, determined to figure out what exactly he was, only to hold back a gasp as her eyes stared into the sockets of a strange primate skull.
Her mind raced at the implications, believing that the lord had been murdered by a spell not too long before she entered the throne room. But those quick thought and theories vanished when the supposed corpse unnervingly shifted in its seat to look at the Princess of Love.
âMay we present the ruler of the Crystal Empire, Lord Skeletor!â One of the Crystal Guards called out as they saluted their new ruler.
Cadence reeled back as Lord Skeletor stood up, his body towering over the Crystal throne itself.
âGreeting, Princââ Lord Skeletor didnât get to finish his sentence as Princess Cadence instinctively teleported out of the throne room in a bright ball of light.
â⌠Fuck.â Lord Skeletor muttered as he slumped back into his throne, a strong statement that perfectly encompassed the feeling of every guard in his throne room.
Skeletor Makes a Deal. (would have taken place before the events of Chapter 29.)
(This would not have been from the new Netflix She-Ra, this Swift Wind would have been based off of the 80's She-Ra cartoon.)
âAAAAAAAHHHH!â
âShhh! SHHHH! Shut up!â Skeletor commanded as he covered the Alicornâs muzzle. âOkay, I need you to calm down for a second, alright?
âWhat have you done Skeletor? Where are we? Where is She-Ra? Is this one of Hordacâs schemes?â The male alicorn asked.
âOne question at a time!â Skeletor silently shouted as he covered Swift Windâs muzzle again. âIâm not really Skeletor, alright? Iâm just stuck in his body, and I didnât mean to bring you here,â he explained before slowly removing his hand from the ponyâs mouth.
âIf youâre not really the evil tyrant, then who are you?â
âUhhhh⌠Thatâs a tough question. I know this is going to sound weirdââ
âWeirder than you not being Skeletor?â
âYes. I uh⌠Donât remember my nameâŚâ
âAnd you expect me to believe that?â Swift Wind asked incredulously.
âAmong other things,â Lord Skeletor muttered to himself. âLook, I understand that you donât trust me, you probably even hate me. But none of that matters, Iâll fix this up in just one second. Just, wait right here and donât do anything, say anything, or touch anything. I will get you home, but you need to wait, here.â
But, I need your help. Just⌠Just donât say anything about Eternia or anything and Iâll find a way out of here for both of us.â
âAm I allowed to speak about Etheria?â
âWhatâs Etheria?â
âMy planet, the one in the dimension separate from Eterniaâs dimension.â
âSeparate? Fuck me, He-Manâs canon is weird.â
âWhat about his cannon?â
âAnd wear this.â
âWhy am I wearing your cloak.â
âTo hide you from them.â
âPuppet Master! Get your ass over here!â
âOh hey, itâs you again. How have things been?â Puppet Master asked.
âTerrible! Fix this!â
â⌠Huh⌠Whoâs the alicon, they look familiar.â
âHeâs Swift Wind, and he got here because of your stupid sword. Get him out of here!â
âSword? Oh, right, I made a sword for you a while ago.â
âIT WAS YESTERDAY!â Skeletor shouted.
âYesterday? Huh. Well, I guess that should be expected when your pulled through space and time. Anyway, this is kind of a first for me. Iâve made sentient props before but those were on purpose, never made one by accident before.â
âI donât care! Fix it before the entire Empire starts to panic!â
âFirstly, donât shout, itâs rude. Secondly, I have no idea how to do that.â
âWhat do you mean you donât know how, you witless boob?! Heâs here because of you!â
âTo be fair, I thought the costume looked cool. If I knew that I was going to end up in another world as this, I would have picked a different costume or outright avoided the convention like it had the plague,â Skeletor explained to Swift Wind.
âI donât know much about his story since the⌠visuals for the story were always off putting. Not to mention, the show was written in a time where writers were still experimenting with plots and story structure, so most of it was⌠I donât know, I just wasnât in to it that much to get really invested in the story. I knew the basics that was enough. I didnât feel like subjecting myself to more of Orko or the other pointless characters in it.â
âOrko? You speak of the Trollan that is friends with He-Man as if he is your enemy.â
âTrollan?â
âHis species, an alien race from another dimension.â
âHuh, always thought he was just a wizard. Anyway, he and a few other characters⌠Were draining. To put it bluntly, his voice and personality were off-putting to me.â
âI never spent much time with the Trollan, though if he is anything like Madam Razz, then I believe I can sympathize.
âIâm not a pony, Iâm aââ
âAlicorn,â Skeletor said as he covered Swift Windâs muzzle. âYes, heâs an alicorn and he likes to be called one all the time. I try to tell him that being called a pony isnât an insult, but heâs as stubborn as a⌠Heâs really stubborn about it. Carry on.â
â¨âWhy did you do that?â Swift Wind asked.
âBecause they have a⌠thing about horses. Itâs their version ofâŚ. a whoreâŚâ
â⌠Is that supposed to be a pun?â
âPretty sure.â
âThen I hate it.â
âHeh. Welcome to the club.â
âIâm not a horse anyway, Iâm a unicorn, at least in this form.â
â⌠Youâre a unicorn?â
âYes. Couldnât you tell from the horn on my head?â
âWell, yeah I got that, but what about your wings?â
âAll unicorns have wings.â
âMaybe where youâre from. But here? Nope.â
âThe Crystal Castle? Did they steal the name from Light Hope?â
âI donât know who that is.â
âUnicorn Island?⌠That is the dumbest name I have ever heard.â
âYou canât use magic?! What kind of Unicorn are you?!â
âNot every unicorn on Unicorn Island can use magic!â Swift Wind shot back as they galloped away from the (insert description of horrifying creature)
âI⌠I can pick things up with my hooves?! How is that possible?â Swift Wind asked as he looked at the spoon in his hoof in wonder before his gaze traveled down the rest of his leg. âGAH! My leg shouldnât move like that! Itâs being backwards!â
âHey! HEY! Stop panicking, alright. Just calm down.â
(I lost the interactions between Skeletor and Puppet Master, which Iâm kind of sad about because I had them have a back and forth as Skeletor caught the PM up on all the events on Earth, like who was the president, how old Stan Lee was when he died, what was going on in the MCU. Just the important stuff.)
The last plan I had was for Skeletor to become a slowly corrupted figure as he traveled from one dimension to another, feeling envious of the protection those other universes had and how it was used. Skeletor would start to steal Crystal Hearts from many dimensions, slowly corrupting his mind and body with the large hoard of Crystal Hearts in the Empireâs tallest tower.
The Mad King.
He exclaimed as he gestured wildly to the many replicas of the Crystal Heart hovering around him.
âThere are monsters out there that can survive the Elements of Harmony, the two princesses, the god of chaos, and the power of the Crystal Empire all at once. Iâve seen them with my own eyes, a golden-haired demon that can slaughter entire countries in a year, an armored warrior who could crush nations with his thumb, an eldritch god that is the embodiment of death that lurks in the shadows, a demon android made of bubblegum that turns everything she sees into candy. Theyâre real, and theyâre out there! If we donât prepare for them, then weâre just asking to be slaughtered!â Skeletor argued.
âYouâre saying that what Iâm doing is wrong, but youâre not giving me an alternative! What do we do when one of them comes to our doorstep, offer them the gift of friendship?! Look at those Elements!â Skeletor commanded as he pointed at a side collection of necklaces and tiaras that looked like replicas of the Elements of Harmony. âThose used to be worn by naive ponies who thought friendship would fix everything, but it clearly didnât since theyâre DEAD!
âFuck those worlds, most of them were dead or dying. We donât need to care about them because theyâre not us! They donât live on our Terra, they donât fight the monsters that come to our door, we do!
âLook at this, do you know what this is?! Itâs a Crystal COCK! One reality was overrun by Caribou who overwhelmed the Empireâs defenses and did this to the Heart. With it, they controlled every single stallion on the planet, and forced them to enslave the mares. They died because they only had one Heart. But if ours gets taken and reshaped into a phallic object, then who cares?! Weâve got dozens more!â Skeletor joyfully exclaimed as his arms shot into the air.
I wonât be using these in the story, so you could consider some of these as non-canon AUâs and random junk. I just thought Iâd share these with all of the people who have shown their support to SMoTE. Thank you for the comments, likes, and especially the Fanart. Christ, I never thought Iâd get a piece of Fanart for the story, and I love each and every drawing thatâs posted in the comments. It really brightens my day.
The mad king story sounds like an interesting read.
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Agreed, holy shit.