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Lucar


A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 6 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

    1 comments · 66 views
  • 9 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

    0 comments · 99 views
  • 10 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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    5 comments · 159 views
  • 13 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

    0 comments · 147 views
  • 13 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

    1 comments · 145 views
Oct
23rd
2020

Chapter 119 Progress (Finished!) · 2:48am Oct 23rd, 2020

This blog will be updated as I work on the chapter 119 of A Sweetie Dreamland. You will be able to see the progress, and if there will be any delay for X or Y reason.


Chapter finished!


Phase 2 finished, and I'm already well advanced into phase 3. Maybe. MAYBE! The chapter will be out tomorrow. Or AT MOST after tomorrow.
Word count: 19357
At this point, I estimate the chapter to have about 22000 or 23000 words.


Phase 2 not quite finished, but almost. Phase 3 will start tomorrow.
Word count: 16865


Phase 2 part 16 done. Started part 17. Phase 2 should be finished tomorrow night. I predict the chapter to come out before the end of the week. Phase 3 will probably take a few days to write, but phase 4 should be fast.
Word count: 15538


Phase 2 part 15 done.
Word count: 14233


Phase 2 part 14 done.
Word count: 13239


Phase 2 part 12 and part 13 done! Only five parts remaining before the end of phase 2!
Word count: 12247


Phase two part 11 done, and I'm well into part 12.
Word count: 10636


End of this small hiatus, and I already finished two new parts of the second phase, so I'm about to start phase 2 part 11.
Word count: 9595


So, I took a few days of rest because searching lyrics day after day is tiring. But now, I finished phase two part eight and started part nine. Phase two is almost halfway done.
Word count: 7703


The song of phase two part eight is giving me some problems, but I think I passed the worst of it with the help of kelduo.
Word count: 7174


Finished Phase two part seven.
Word count: 6763
Couldn't do much today.


Phase two part six done. Part seven is also halfway done.
Word count: 6527


Phase two part five done. A long part it was.
Word count: 5715


Phase two part four finished, now working on part five. It's not easy, I'm working into giving lyrics to 18 songs one after another after all, but I'm still having fun.
Word count: 4570


Phase two part three finished. Starting part four. Part three was rather short, but difficult, and part four should be similar. Part five should be longer and easier.
Word count: 3902
Also, I found someone to do some drawings for the fight, but I don't know if they will be done by the time I finish the chapter. If not, then I will simply post the chapter without the images and update it once they're done.


Just finished phase two part two of the fight. I'm about to start phase two part three, but the song there will probably give me some difficulty. Phase two part three and phase two part four will be the hardest before it gets better.
Word count: 3343

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Comments ( 34 )

How many 'part 2 phases' are there going to be?

5387378
With that many phases, you won't need a part 3.

5388400
Oooh yes, it will be needed. Remember, Sweetie Belle has a secret power that she partially used in her fight against Galacta Knight.

5388406
Why is part taking so long?

5392138
Because, one, it's not easy to find lyrics, two, I'm taking more my time, and three, IRL stuff.

I’M SO EXCITED

This is massive. It feels like a whole story is being devoted to this fight.

5393367
It's pretty much this. This fight is the conclusion of over one hundred chapters of story, adventures, and fights. There's a lot to put in there. Four phases divided into twenty four parts in total. The chapter may probably reach 30 000 words.

5393374
Well keep up the good work.

5393374
With how long it's taking you to finish part 2 of the fight, maybe you should put part 3 in the chapter after this one so you can take a pause. What do you think?

5394899
It won't be needed. Phase 3 and phase 4 will not be as hard as phase 2 because there won't be any songs.

5394905
How far are you now?

5396383
It's kind of on hiatus for now. I'm letting Kelduo do the lyrics of the songs because I had too much difficulties and he's much better than me, English not being my native language. But first, he needs to reread the whole story.

5396387
Can’t you work ahead? Or does that not work?

5396412
It's easier to write the fight when I have the song done. I can better time the paragraphs to them

5396417
I mean part three and four

5396421
I could, I suppose, but I don't know yet how exactly phase 2 will end. I mean, I know how it will end, but the exact actions that will lead to phase 3, I haven't them yet in mind. They come up as I write, you see.

5396422
So where are you now?

5408703
I started phase 3.

Comment posted by Spellflame deleted Dec 2nd, 2020

5408739
Uh... I think that you've mistaken quote for spoiler. ^^ But yeah, I'm at it.

5408744
Think it’ll be done today?

5409040
Like I said, maybe. I don't know yet. I will try.

5409040
f l a m e. . . What? you told me to spell 'flame'. LOL

5409057
Spell as in magic
Spellflame
Fire that is a spell!

5409113
I was just making a joke you sourpuss.:ajbemused:

5409339
I know, you are literally the first to make that joke

5409046
I think you should end this blog with saying you finished the chapter
Just a recommendation

5409669
You're right.

5409681
What’re you working on now?

5412543
The next chapter of A Sweetie Dreamland. After the huge work that the previous one has been, I'm taking my time. The chapter is about halfway done.

I also edited the blog with the pause descriptions to write all the descriptions of the Kirby vs Sweetie Belle fight.

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