Longer. · 3:14am Feb 16th, 2012
I decided to merge the first two chapters of TE:AD and make each chapter longer instead. This way the chapters are longer and much more fortified, as well as adjusting the dialogue to make it less awkward.
I'll try to change a few things, so don't hesitate to tell me if I need to change a thing or two to make the story better. ;)