Corrections of dates mentioned in story. · 7:52pm Oct 2nd, 2020
As noted in the Author's Notes of my previous chapter, I misrecorded the number of days that had passed in my story throughout the chapters. However, that has since been corrected, and below are the corrections that were made:
Chapter 23. Exchange of Services.
Question from Cerb:
"We've been here four days. What's the longest you've gone without?"
Corrected from six days to four days.
Chapter 23. Exchange of Services.
Narration over Sniff’s thoughts:
Four days of swearing, and this was their reaction to figuring out that they had been dropping expletives almost every other sentence half the time. "You know, I was getting really confused about none of you reacting to all our cursing."
Corrected from Six days to Four days.
Chapter 28. Date Night, Not Alone Tonight.
Dialog from Cerb:
"No," Cerb firmly demanded. "I asked you out, I'm buying you this amazing dinner we just had, we had drinks together, and now a dessert that kills me to see you looking so miserable trying to eat. So fuck it if I'm not a horse, colt, whatever thing I need to be to make this normal, or the joke that got us here. I'm still here because you and Flutters are the best thing that's happened to me since I got here, and you don't deserve to have anything except the best this world has to offer. And as of four days ago, that includes me, or so help me god, I will start smashing shit."
Corrected seven days to four days.
Chapter 42. Theories, Introductions, Missions, and a Question.
Narration:
A good stone's throw away from farthest bath tent, Cerb was busy shoveling out a new burn pit. The plan was to burn as much evidence of their carnivorous foods that had spoiled in the six days they've been there. The canned goods were too valuable of commodities to destroy and would have to be hidden at a later time.
Corrected from eight days to six days.
Chapter 46. Magic Fingers And Apologies Of The Past.
Dialog from Cerb:
"Yes!" Cerb answered, clearly annoyed. "I've been here like... six days. And I've never been to a spa. I don't know these things."
Corrected from eight days to six days.
Chapter 48. Can I Get a Hell Yeah!
Narration:
This was the dawn of their seventh day in the land of magic talking ponies. Seven days and he struggled to try and keep everything straight.
Corrected from ninth day to seventh day, and Nine days to Seven days.
Chapter 71. Compensating. Part 5 "Double, Double, Pinkie's in trouble."
Time and Location heading:
[Nine days ago in the forest just behind the human embassy.]
Corrected from Ten days to Nine days.
My apologies for the mistakes, however, none of these have any impact on the story itself. In another Blog, I will put an outline of the days for chapters that have been published.
