Sep
29th
2020
Time for Conflict! · 7:28pm Sep 29th, 2020
Well, after rewriting this story three times, I'm finally more or less satisfied with where it is. The published version of the first book in the "Thorn of Equestria" series finally gets its first conflict introduced and admittedly, I'm hoping it's going to be a real puzzler to the folks who have the time or desire to read it.
That being said, I encourage any and all constructive criticism from those who have actually read what I have so far, understanding of course that the story is far from complete. Please keep me posted on your thoughts!
At this point, it's on to Chapter 4!
May the wind always rise under your wings,
~ Wind Song
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