A Little Preview · 2:20am Jul 15th, 2020
About five months since the previous update of A Sweetie Dreamland and I really feel guilty about this. To make up for this, I decided to post here a preview, a prototype of a passage of the sequel to show a little of what is awaiting you. Like I just said, this will just be a prototype, so there may be some change when the corresponding chapter will be out. I'm also posting this because I miss writing OP Sweetie.
They were both on their last leg. Both were heavily breathing. But Frisk knew he had won. Sans' 'special attack' was only gaining him time. He could already see the skeleton's eyes slowly closing.
Aaand there. The lazybone was sleeping, utterly exhausted.
It was time.
Slowly, despite not being his turn, Frisk forced himself to move toward the FIGHT button, ready to give the final blow.
Slash!
Sans suddenly woke up and dodged the knife.
"heh, didja really think you would be abl-"
Slash! Frisk still had his hand on the FIGHT button, so he immediately attacked again, taking Sans off guard.
BAM! Only for a metal staff to suddenly block the knife, saving Sans' life.
"What?"
"what?"
Out of nowhere, a small white horse had appeared between Frisk and Sans and blocked the human's attack with its staff.
Frisk immediately stepped back, not understanding what happened. Where did this horse come from? Another monster? He thought they had all fled!
Then, the horse talked, revealing itself to be a her as she smiled at Sans.
"Sorry for not coming earlier, Sans, but I was waiting my turn. For once that you were doing something, I didn't want to spoil your hour of glory. Beside, it was fun to watch you kicking Frisk's butt over and over again."
Sans raised an eyebrow in wonder. "uh. you kinda have me at a disadvantage there. do i know you?"
"Kind of. I already met an alternate version of you in another universe where Frisk here was much nicer and was a girl. Ice meeting you, I'm Sweetie Belle. I will take your place from now, you can rest."
"uh. a visitor from another world? wow, i really didn't expect something like that to happen."
"I know, the visitor from another world saving the day at the last minute is like the worst deus ex machina, but hey, such is life," shrugged the filly. "If you want to complain, you can do so to the guy who's dictating my life. Oh, and yeah, I know about my LOVE. Don't worry, I'm not hurting innocent."
"your L... oh. i see. how much did you kill to reach such a LV?"
"I don't know. I lost count after blowing up a mothership the size of a planet."
Sans gave a deadpan look. "you aren't kidding, uh?"
"Not at all. After all, I'm a foal, not a kid."
This got a laugh out of Sans. "heh, nice one. are you sure you can deal with mister pokerface over there?"
"Don't worry for me. Go lay down against a pillar and enjoy the show," said Sweetie Belle before she materialized a bag of popcorn and tossed it at Sans. "There, for you."
"cool. thanks," said the skeleton as he caught the bag.
"Nope, they're warm."
Again, Sans laughed, only to stop when he suddenly flashed, and he felt something. "what did you do?"
"I made sure you wouldn't reset each time Frisk will reload after death. That's the main reason you lost your fight. Frisk died and died again, but he learned your patterns."
This surprised Frisk. "You know?"
"Of course I know. Like I just said, I know an alternate version of you. You can save your progress and load each time you die. It's like a video game for you. Too bad, this won't work with me. Time stuff is one of my maaaany talents even if I still have a long way to go before I can do something like you can do. I won't be able to stop you from reloading, but I won't do the same error than Sans."
Sans' smile became wider and he chuckled. "uh oh, someone's in trouble. welp, i will leave this fight to you then, kiddo." At this, Sans went to sit beside a nearby pillar, beginning to eat his popcorn.
Frisk frowned. "You may know about my power, but this won't change the result. As you said, I can come back from death without limit. You will eventually make an error."
Sweetie Belle smirked. "Well then, how about we start our dance? You know what, I won't even attack before you, so if you want, you can do your little 'check' on me."
Frisk smiled. "Thanks."
So Frisk placed his hand on the ACT button and did the check.
*SWEETIE BELLE 19076 ATK 58 DEF 855 LOVE
*Wait what?!
Sweetie Belle looked down at her LOVE. "Uh. It climbed a little since last time. No surprise there." She looked back at Frisk. "Anyway. Your turn again. Like I said, I won't attack. Do your worst."
Frisk hesitated for a second. Someone with that much LOVE clearly wasn't someone to mess with, especially considering her ATK. Still, he had the advantage of having his SAVE/LOAD power.
He still did a second check.
*SWEETIE BELLE 19076 ATK 58 DEF 855 LOVE
*A being from another world with unknown powers.
Welp, so much for hoping to gain some more info. Sweetie Belle still didn't attack, patiently waiting, staff at her side. Finally, Frisk went for the FIGHT button and attacked.
Slash!
Then, with her bare hoof, Sweetie Belle deflected his knife, sending the object flying.
"My turn."
Before he knew it, Frisk's head was rolling on the floor.
His SOUL broke.
Everything became dark.
And Frisk appeared beside the SAVE point beside the entrance of the hall.
Sweetie Belle was still sitting in the middle of the room, smiling sweetly, as if she hadn't just beheaded a child.
Sans dropped a popcorn he was about to eat in shock.
Frisk could only stare in disbelief as the filly showed a sword made of ice, the sword dripping blood.
The filly then smiled, the exact same smile Frisk was giving a few minute earlier.
"Let's see how DETERMINED you are."
Aww... I was hoping it'd be a Pokemon crossover and we see Groudon being humiliated in front other Weather Trio members, with them being amused.
So, the sequel is going to include Undertale? Nice. I also love how you had Sans speak only in lowercase like he does in the game.
You know, I was actually thinking of doing an Undertale story myself. But first, I'm going to use my determination to work even harder on my Super Mario Maker 2 levels.
“Determination Combo, Determination Kirby/Determination Sweetie Belle. Error Attack Error Defense Error LV
yu done fucked now boy
I think having a Ranma 1/2 crossover would be insane. Having cologne and hopposia attacking ranma together with nodoka and seeing sweetie bell trash them. It would probably freakout the girls.
Undertale? UNDERTALE!?
You sir or ma'am has gotten my attention. This will be very interesting.
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Undertale will only be a part of the sequel. There will be many other universes including Pokemon. Sadly, contrary to what I wrote here, I don't have yet the passage with Groudon fully in mind. At best, I have a battle between Sweetie Belle and Red.
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I always love a good undertale crossover. And stay determined, I'm sure the Meta Knight part is almost finished. Once you are done with it, I will be able to write the chapter and you will be able to do the rest at your laisure.
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Thankfully for Frisk here, it's only Sweetie Belle. Well, he's still screwed.
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I only saw the first few episodes of Ranma 1/2 a long time ago, so I can't imagine how hilarious such an event would be.
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Sir. ^^ And yes, Undertale. I HAD to do an Undertale crossover some time, I love too much this game to not do one.
I'm surprised nobody freaked out about Sweetie breaking the fourth wall.
Also, do you see Sweetie Belle singing her version of Stronger Than You while trashing Frisk? I totally do.
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In ranma 1/2 there is an insane love maze.
Gemma satotme and soun tendo had promise to United the two schools of anything goes martial arts by agreeing to engaged their children.
At the middle of the series this is the love maze:
Ranma loves Akane but hates the engagement thing. Akane also loves Ranma but is against the engagement by claiming she hates him.
Takewaki Kuno hates the Male Ranma and crushes on both Akane and the female side of Ranma and is trying to kill the male side to free his two loves. And Kodachi Kuno is just the opposite has a crush on the male side and wants to kill the red hair harlot. And they both have seen the curse in action.
Xia puu( shampoo) is a Chinese amazon warrior who is to set to kill female Ranma for defeat her but she ends up being defeated by the male side and falling in love too. But by her tribe it’s a law that males if an outsider male gets the kiss of marriage it is set in stone and no other law maters. This enrages Mus tuss( mousse) that he has to kill Ranma and Defeat shampoo but he hates the laws of the tribe but since shampoo is going to be the head one day he has to do it but he can’t bring himself to knock her out.
Ryouga hibikk has a crush on Akane but he uses his curse as a pig to make Ranma jealous but he gets a taste of what Ranma has to deal with and chooses to only occasionally mess with Ranma at the end because he figures out that he is in love with Aikari a pig farm girl who breeds pigs that love to wrestle other pigs
Ukyo kounji is forced to be a male after her father foolishly fell for Gemma trick and is order to kill them to get her father to change her birth birth certificate back to female. She found out that Ranma had no clue she was a she thanks to Gemma. Konastu is a male trained in the way of the konichi and is crushing on Ukyo who is holding out until Ranma decides. Tuba ursa is Ukyo’s takewaki but as a male dress as a girl. And to make matters worse shampoo, ukyo, Genma, soun and eventually Nodoka all uses honor that he has to chose complete ignoring that it was genma’s fault in the first place.
Insane isn’t it?
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Oh, also Ryouga's sense of direction is so ludicrously bad that it's used as an excuse for crossovers by having him take such a wrong turn that he somehow ends up in a different universe.
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And I thought Zorro from One Piece was bad.
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Shampoo has a curse that turns her into a cat which thanks the Kenko haten ( cat fu) Ranma is scared of cats. Mousse becomes a duck. There is even one who turns into a duck riding a goat riding a yeti.
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How is this...? No, forget this, I will do like with Pinkie Pie and say "Just because".
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Actually all the curses come from Jusenkyo( pools of sorrow) and the Magic water comes from the Phoenix mountain. Which is controlled by the Phoenix tribe. And they have the ruler bath in the source to become a Demi god. And in the final chapters of the Magna Akane is turned into a doll and falls into a coma. Ranma gets into rage and kills a demigod which leads into a fail wedding because of the other stuff. So the story is incomplete
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I didn't think such a popular manga would have an incomplete ending.
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Well, she knows Sans and Pinkie Pie, who are both fourth wall-breakers. Besides, at this point she was probably certain that someone made a story or two based on her adventures.
I'd be glad to put together lyrics for Sweetie's Stronger Than You once I wrap up the Meta Knight theme.
Kelduo647 is confused! He hit himself in his confusion!
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I don't know much about One Piece, but I do know two other characters who have a bad sense of direction: Bugs Bunny ("I knew I should've taken that left turn at Albuquerque") and Leon from Pokemon Sword and Shield (His sense of direction is so bad that he couldn't find his way to the Towers of Two Fists in the Isle of Armor).
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While it was subtle, Zorro did manage to get lost a straight hallway once in the anime. (He was being chased and the chasers reached the next scene before he did). The manga saw that, went "hold my beer" and had him manage to get separated from the group while riding the same animal, or in other words without exercising agency at all. It's like Oda-sensei is trying to start a feud with his fellow mangaka or something.
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Oh, you will be surprised o how she discovers about the fourth wall.
It's entirely optional, for the lol, so no need to rush for it.
Someone should do a club of people with bad sense of direction. Nobody would be present because they would always get lost.
There's no hope for him.
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I remember.
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Unfortunately it does because the creator ran out of stories.