Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.
5304161 How is Moonbutt going to go for our 'evil tarterusspawn' ? Or is she playing the long game since her direct approach ended in failure?
Still waiting for Canterlot Nobels/- Mane6 + Spike go for a verbal assault. First group to eliminate a political treat and the second for what Lunas action was. A cruel mistake that was quite dubiose since she used Celestias trust to get alone to Ponyville.
5304616 The usual crap Like: -They dont deserved there taxes increase or they want the existing swifted to the 'common ponys'. -Disputed about land right or bussness deals... -Why Prince Blueblood didnt marry there daughters yet.
Maybe ask other author to give you a helping hand/hoof/claw
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I got it I just needed to stop procrastinating
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Or just after edit the Luna parts... Than again... We cant do that to the main protagonist
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How is Moonbutt going to go for our 'evil tarterusspawn' ? Or is she playing the long game since her direct approach ended in failure?
Still waiting for Canterlot Nobels/- Mane6 + Spike go for a verbal assault. First group to eliminate a political treat and the second for what Lunas action was. A cruel mistake that was quite dubiose since she used Celestias trust to get alone to Ponyville.
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What else could Celestia be referring to when she said the nobles were throwing a hissy fit
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The usual crap
Like:
-They dont deserved there taxes increase or they want the existing swifted to the 'common ponys'.
-Disputed about land right or bussness deals...
-Why Prince Blueblood didnt marry there daughters yet.