Something creepy this way comes. · 3:51pm Jun 9th, 2020
Soon Victor von Doom going to rest. During that time the dream walking Princess Luna going to notice the strange mental scape.
Now I want her to meet Hans but I’m trying to think what is more creepy.
1,) mask and hands with just a shadow like body.
2.) a body that looks normal but moves disjointed.
3.) a flickering form jumping from place to place. Think like a video game glitching.
The idea is that Hans isn’t all there just like doom he fragmented and incomplete. Without full memories of who he was his mental appearance is incomplete.
I’d say 2 is the most appropriate metaphor for Hans’ current state. If you want creepy though I’d say 3 especially if his appearance isn’t static between flickers. Like his form is reflecting cognitive dissonance between what Hans himself still thinks he is and what his subconscious mind/dream realm knows he isn’t.
3 most definitely would be the creepiest.
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To make it creepier, show a bloody visage of him between flickers, with parts of him missing to represent him incomplete mind. Whispers of helpmehelpmehelpme as background noise hidden in the static
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3, but avoid terms like glitched or other computer phrasing.