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ShadowStar_IMHP


I'm a writer of fanfictions. Of course being an amature I have spelling and grammar errors.

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  • 34 weeks
    I just don’t have the drive anymore

    I tried o really did. However it just not there anymore.

    I just don’t have the desire to write. I deleted the story “Me, Myself, and I” because it just had two chapters.

    I’m resetting the story “Mother Moon, Fallen Sunset” to canceled.

    Sorry for all those that followed me, the spark of writing just not there.

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  • 41 weeks
    Sorry for taking so long

    One of the reasons I stopped writing was that I had far less time on my hands. Not only am I now working full time, I have no one at home doing housework. So all that dirty laundry, dishes, and yardwork falls on me. My sister lives with me but is almost as lazy as Zephyr Breeze (JK). She's a great teacher; she's always working on a project for her class or crafting.

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  • 45 weeks
    I have the names for my OC.

    The three heads for my Chimera would be named. Wynken Blynken and Nod for the old Lullaby.

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  • 45 weeks
    Yup it's official I'm writing Me, Myself, and I instead of the other story.

    I just spent the Fourth of July writing, and I already have a higher word count than the other story I'm working on. The chapter reaches 1900+ words, and I still have more to do. The updated paid Grammarly has some nice features that make finding those pesky grammar errors easier.

    It seems I got it done today! Well, July 5th at 1:am my time.

    3 comments · 101 views
  • 45 weeks
    I hate my muse. Really sometimes it like my muse is drunk.

    It will be a little longer than I thought for the story of another entity in Luna's body with Nightmare Moon and Luna herself.

    I have to write up a more detailed outline. I realized I had an exciting start but didn't have a story arc.

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Jun
9th
2020

Something creepy this way comes. · 3:51pm Jun 9th, 2020

Soon Victor von Doom going to rest. During that time the dream walking Princess Luna going to notice the strange mental scape.

Now I want her to meet Hans but I’m trying to think what is more creepy.

1,) mask and hands with just a shadow like body.

2.) a body that looks normal but moves disjointed.

3.) a flickering form jumping from place to place. Think like a video game glitching.

The idea is that Hans isn’t all there just like doom he fragmented and incomplete. Without full memories of who he was his mental appearance is incomplete.

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Comments ( 5 )

I’d say 2 is the most appropriate metaphor for Hans’ current state. If you want creepy though I’d say 3 especially if his appearance isn’t static between flickers. Like his form is reflecting cognitive dissonance between what Hans himself still thinks he is and what his subconscious mind/dream realm knows he isn’t.

3 most definitely would be the creepiest.

3
To make it creepier, show a bloody visage of him between flickers, with parts of him missing to represent him incomplete mind. Whispers of helpmehelpmehelpme as background noise hidden in the static

3, but avoid terms like glitched or other computer phrasing.

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