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Remember that one story I wrote? Me neither.

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May
29th
2020

Call Of Cthulhu-Shy Revised. · 1:44am May 29th, 2020


I've revised the story so far with minor edits.

I've made Twilight far less critical of Fluttershy.

I've cut back on descriptions where I could, mostly kept the flowery stuff for Fluttershy's vision.

I hope these minor edits help the story flow better, for upcoming chapters it will be easier to hopefully not be stilted.

Comments ( 2 )

Reads post, notices that it's about a story that I'd been patiently awaiting an update for, cheers just a bit, happy that the author hasn't abandoned it.

looking forward to seeing what you'll be posting!

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Expect an update today and perhaps another sometime over the weekend.

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