Holy Crap.... and hi? · 11:22pm May 23rd, 2020
So, as the few folks who followed me before this know, I tend to just pop in stories when they run into my head and I want to share them. For some I don't plan them at all, for others I do. The fact that Missing Piece of My Core, the story I've just posted, has gotten such a response as it has surprises the ever loving hell out of me. It's currently on the 'Popular Stories' section of the site and Albinocorn, whom I consider to be a high tier author, has commented on it.
Needless to say I'm a little overwhelmed.
I have taken what folks have said about the story to heart, though, and I'm going to be rereading the next chapter before I post it to the site. I do tend to overuse the whole LUS aspect in my writing and should cut down, if just a bit. I still think it has a place, but I've had too many points exposed to me by you all to ignore it.
If you're new here and to my works, welcome, I hope you look at some of my older stories too. I'm also active over on Twitter and I stream video games regularly over at Twitch every Sunday, Tuesday, and Thursday for those interested.
I thank you all for reading my silly little alternate take on Forgotten Friendship and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as it comes out.
Pokeprof