Cast an important vote to decide the plot of the sequel! · 5:09pm Apr 3rd, 2020
WARNING!!! DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU DO NOT WAN'T TO KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT THE SEQUEL!!!!
Well, typical, I have thought a lot about it, and I can't decide on the plot line.
Not for the lack of ideas, but the lack of too many ideas. I'm not sure which plot I should choose as I feel they would all be interesting.
But this is where you come in!
Below you will see some numbers with some short plot descriptions. All you have to do is to comment which number you would like to see! You can give a reason if you want, or come up with your own input on the idea you vote for!
So to anyone who likes this story, if you have the time, PLEASE, tell me which of the ideas you would like to see most. It would really help me plan out the follow up story.
Again, don't read if you do not want to know anything.
1#: Daniel has appeared in Equestria, as a pony no less! Unfortunately, he lands in the Everfree and cannot remember a single thing! Will he find help in Ponyville? Will he remember? Will he fall in love again?
2#: Daniel has appeared in Equestria, as a pony no less! Unfortunately, he lands somewhere in Equestria and cannot remember a single thing! He has a feeling however, and he let his heart guide him to Ponyville as he feel he must go there. Along the way he befriends (Original characters? Or the likes of Trixie?) The road is long, but adventure is ahead!
3#: Daniel has appeared in the MLP world, as a pony no less! Unfortunately, he lands in somewhere in unknown and has no idea where he is! Not only must he find his way to Equestria, but go to Ponyville and find the six girls that had changed his life so much. Will he survive the journey ahead?
4#: Daniel has appeared in the MLP world, as a pony no less! Unfortunately, he arrives just before the MLP movie, and is captured by the storm king's forces and is forced into hard labor to help construct more warships, Daniel must not only survive his captivity, but find a way to escape and warn Twilight and the others. But how? Can he escape? Can he start a rebellion among his fellow prisoners?
Now, this one was suggested by a friend, but I'll be honest, I do not feel this one would make all to much sense in this story. But a promise is a promise, and I will hear you guys out on the matter.
5#? Daniel has appeared in the MLP world, as an alicorn no less!
I.. I don't know what else to add to that last one, SORRY MICHELLE!!! #Stillfriends
Lols, anyway, please vote by commenting the number you wanna see. You can add more if you want, but still remember. Nothing is set in stone yet, your votes will help a lot on the planning on the next story.
Mostly because I want to know what kind of cover I will have made for the story too XD
I vote 5 because why the hell not. But you clould combine 5 with 3 that would be intresting
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Damn! Just lost a bet!!
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XD
Same here for number 5 because it would be an interesting idea
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You two suck! I am NOT paying 10$ dollars! I'm only paying 5 dollars once no matter how many vote for five!
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Fine by me as long as i get a good story im game
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Erghh... You know she's laughing at me now right?
Traitors! The lot of you!
No just kidding, if that is people want I shall give it to them!
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Dont worry i had this crap happend to me as well back in school, lost 30 dollars that day
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Buck, well at least I'm only loosing 5.
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i say 5 and you can combine it with 3 or 4
5 just because i would love to see teh shenanigans that coem from it
3, but transition it into 5 eventually.
5 because it would be interesting
I vote #1 only because it will be mostly romance with the ponies reminding him why he fell in love with them though if you added #5 and maybe even have Celestia, Luna and if you have Shining royally f’ing it up Cadance joining the herd (just an extra thought)
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Are you all really going to say 5?! You all made me loose 5 dollars!!!
Lol, no, well, I can see some fun things come out of it. If that what people are interested in I don't mind. Just don't people to think he's like an OP kind of character. Or something of that nature.
5 and if you want,mix it with 4. Hell add the equestria girls while your at it
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14 girls? Some also suggest Luna and Celestia, so 16 girls!? No way, that be an insane harem story for me to write, I just stick with the mane six
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Quality over quantity, totally understandable.
Not that the girls from the equestria girls are bad per se... perhaps a spin off?
The Celestia and Luna is hilarious, if the movie thing works out, try for Tempest!
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I have thought about making a spin off, but we'll see once this story has ended. ^^
I'll be honest this is in my read later pile but If I do still get a vote: I would like to see option 2 or 3 transitioning into 5 only if the story calls for it though.
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Of course you get a vote. Everyone is welcome.
I would say a #3 #4 mix that then goes a little #5
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#1 with possible transition into #5.
Go with #5 who does like op m.cs.?
#3 and #4, because I dislike the idea of Daniel losing his memories...
His whole life from then on would be 'who am I' and stuff... Doesn't seem too fun.
(Put my vote on which is more popular between #3, or #4.)
I choose 5 with a mix of 2 and 3.
I mean those girls probably fantasize him secretly as a strong, handsome, big stallion.
Why no option for him to stay human?
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Ok just a heads up. I have yet to actually read this story....I'm in the process of finishing 3 different stories that I've been reading for a bit (each of them is like 150k+ words). This story IS on my read later list and I was actually planning to read it next. So w that being said........
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I agree w Hawkx1. Go for 1. Definitely go for adding Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. If it helps the story then you should definitely trans to 5 but ONLY if it helps the storyline.
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And you HAD to know alot of ppl would vote for the alicorn angle when you put it out there. I mean what brony wouldn't jump at that chance lol.
Also are you planning (or is there already) a mature version? I'm just saying bc there's a lot more freedom and flexibility in M vs T.
Plus personally I kinda like scenes that have sex in them. Not necessarily clop per se. Bc you can have sex scenes w/o it being gratuitous. Like putting in sex hust for the sake of sex is all well and good but I like stories where the sex is more an aid to the story. Also M doesn't mean there has to be really steamy scenes. M is so much more than explicit sex.
Again I haven't read this story yet. So if I've said something that doesn't make sense when compared w the story
That comment I deleted was the exact same as my other one. For some reason it posted twice.
My vote is 3 because I feel like the whole "I can't remember anything" schtick is a bit overplayed and the whole captured by the storm king thing would only work in my mind if you were willing to go to extreme lengths. I would by fine with 5 if you can find a logical way for him to ascend during the story and if it's necessary. Him becoming an alicorn for no reason would be weird. As always, keep up the good work my friend!
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Why not have him try to learn his new abilities since he isn't used to being to being this way
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Personally I’d just have it be a love and adjusting to being a pony story
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I get what you're saying, but I honestly hate the memory loss schtick because it gets rid of a lot of personality from the character. That isn't even mentioning the fact that my knowledge of psychology kills me, since the explanation for any version of memory loss where they can regain their lost memories without reading about it generally uses magic or, even worse, the true love cliché. If you're going to do memory loss make sure they don't get their memories back. Doing so makes you feel for the character more as well as the others because they have to work from the ground up to rebuild the relationship that they once had. That is a touching story because it isn't a problem that is truly solved.
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However they also say to the loved ones that if they take them to familiar places and faces that some memories may come back. So while not remembering all his memories (mostly the ones not concerning the girls both in pony form and in human form) some of his memories, mostly those of the girls should still be able to come back. The question then becomes does he remember his time without the memories or not. Most fics do but some don't.
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I would still rather see him keep his memories so he can be fighting to find his way back to the ones that he loves instead of having this strange feeling telling him to go to Ponyville. It would give him a great drive. Honestly I think that a timeline split would be a good idea as well. He makes one story about one idea and another story that follows the other. It would work because of how different the two stories would be.
Planning the sequel before the current one is finished? You are too much the artiste, Herr Case.
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I guess, but I want them to tie into each other neatly. Besides, and am going to commission a front cover for it, so I need to know what kind it should be. ^^
Getting the input helps me decide on the story, and thus helping me knowing what kind of cover should be made.
I'm With PrinzEugen Combine 5 with 3.