I'm Not Just Bad: I'm Terribad

To use one of Shortskirtsandexplosions's words, though he may not have been the first to use it.

I'm talking about pacing, if the pattern wasn't obvious.

If you've read this far, please, enjoy the new chapter of To Bellenast: a Fallout: Equestria story that I have pretentiously not called such in its title. I may change it to exactly that at some point, To Bellenast: A Fallout: Equestria Story, but I don't like having that many colons in a title, so it may have to be relegated to the sub-heading if I ever get around to making a fancy cover text (No promises; my artistic and calligraphic skill is limited to Paint. As in, MS Paint, and I am no Andrew Hussie.)

Or, if you don't enjoy it, or if it raises more questions about things that I annoyingly have left out, feel free to bug me in the comments.

I promise I'll be terribly shaken up about it.

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