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Earlier today, I wrote the final chapter of All the Smallest Things. It was a lot of fun... a lot more fun than Rainbows After Rain, for reasons I can't quite figure out. In summary, it's a crossover between G5 and the Pokémon games where Pokémon start appearing in Equestria, and the Scarlet/Violet trio team up
Pokémon are appearing all over Equestria. With the help of some new friends, the New Mane 6 are determined to find out why.
It's called All the Smallest Things. Why am I not posting it on Fimfiction right away? Well...
I originally joined to participate in A New World, a New Way just as it was starting to die, but ended up getting into a lot of non-crossovers as well. I still think my standout fic is Silent Wings; while I had to rush the last two chapters, it helped me break a lot of new ground. My interest in My Little Pony has phased in and out over the years, and I don't use this site as much as I used to.
I started doing YouTube Poops a few months ago, but this is my first My Little Pony one.
I just need someone to beta-read it. Here's another sneak peak:
Moony raised her head. “Pleeease can you let us in? Pretty please? We need to do something important!”
“How important?” asked the hippogriff.
“It’s super, duper important!” Moony continued. “See, we want to find out—”
“I’ve heard you have the most accurate historical records on the continent,” Sol interrupted.
I just put it on hiatus. The problem with my Newverse fanfics is that I always cram in more than I intended, so they always feel rushed. On the other hand, I don't want the cover I commissioned to go to waste, and I'm challenging myself to finish a fanfic. What do you think?
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I like it tho
5218694
After posting this, I realised that my main problem is that I rushed chapter 4, so I might rewrite it when I have time.
5218715
Yeah chapter 4 seems rushed, but it doesn’t read like a clusterfuck. So I think it’s fine, if not needing to be touched up a bit. Perhaps it is the way it is because you wanted to get the ball rolling on other plot threads.
5218753
Yeah, I just needed to get everyone to meet so I could continue the plot. Maybe I'll just add an extra scene.