Revisions, Corrections, and Suggestions

I recently looked over the first chapter of my fic. I am surprised at the amount of progress I have made in the field of story writing, thanks to readers who take time to comment, and criticize, I am able to improve. I edited the first chapter to the suggestions of a few people. Give it a look, tell me what you think about the changes.

Anyways, on to news about the next chapter:

I had come to a halt. I had a plan, but seeing the reaction of the audience I became uncertain of what I am to do next. I have come a conclusion, the next chapter will be a flashback to another hard time in Robberts life, and maybe Johnson will make an appearance, if you guys want?

Tell me what you think about this idea?

Do you want to see Johnson in the next chapter?