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My Sister Tia


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Jan
31st
2020

I need an editor for the first chapter of a story that I am planning on having 20 chapters in when completed. · 3:24am Jan 31st, 2020

I need an editor for the first chapter of My Little Angel. I plan to have 20 chapters by the time it´s done. It is just 174 words in the first chapter, but it´s a start, and I need to get it out there soon. I also have other chapters written if you are interested in going above and beyond. Please PM me if you are interested in helping me with my story.
Thank you,
-My Sister Tia

Comments ( 3 )

Here's one problem I see off the bat. Why make a chapter that small? It usually never speaks well for the rest of the story when the author starts it off with something that barely qualifies as even half a chapter.

You also have to remember, that unless you plan to release every chapter at once, the story must be 1000 words or more. Otherwise, it will be rejected.

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I has more than 1,000 words written. I just want to start off with knowing my first chapter is good.

I'll gladly take a gander at it.

Go on an pm me and I'll send you my drive email address

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