Swimming Lessons Going Under Some Revisions · 7:48pm Jan 18th, 2020
Hello again, everybody. So, after spending the last few days digging through A Tale of Two Suns, Book 1 chapter 9, and making about 150 different tweaks to it, a very grueling process, the next thing I decide to do... is go through the same process with Swimming Lessons. Yeah, that makes sense.
When reading the story over, I thought there were things I might have been able to tweak, so I'm doing a thorough inspection right now, since I'm on a role. Same rules apply as all the other times. Nothing major is changing, I'm just fine tuning the words, which I hope will lead to a much improved story-reading experience.
Hopefully it won't take me as long as Book 1 chapter 9... oh, wait, Swimming Lessons is actually a bit longer than that chapter... Well, looks like it will probably take me a few more days to finish this up. I'll let you guys know.
