AppleDash Tickle

Applejack layed down in the field next to a apple tree.. when rainbow dash came over and said “Hey Aj” “Hi Rd” they both replied back. “What are you doing?” Rainbow dash said to AJ. “I’m just laying down” AJ said. “Oh alright” rd confirmed. At a nearby tree, a leaf fell and landed on applejacks stomach. AJ Giggled. “What’s so funny?” Rainbow dash said. “Oh.. umm a leaf fell and-“ AJ was too embarrassed to tell all of it. “Ohhh.. ok” Rd said.. She thought.. She is ticklish? This will be fun!’ Applejack closed her eyes for a bit then rainbow jumped on applejacks legs.. “What the hay?” AJ said. “So you are ticklish?” Rd snickered. “Umm.. N-No.. Why??” AJ said. “We’ll see bout that Aj” Rainbow said. Rainbow dash tickled AJ’s feet. She tried her best to keep in the laughter.. but soon she couldn’t hold it anymore.. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..!! OK OKHAYAHAHAHAYAHY! STAHAHAHAP! S-STAHAHAHAP! PLEHEHEHEHEHEASE!” Applejack was extremely ticklish on her feet. “Wow AJ! You might be more ticklish than me!” RD said. “RAHAHAINBOHOHOHOHOHOW! NOHOHOHOHOHO! PLEHEHEHEASE! S-STAHAHAHAP IHIHIHIHIT!” AJ said. “Nah” Rd said. This carried on for about 5 minutes. Then applejack flipped rd over and sat on her legs. “Heh! Payback!” AJ said as she smirked. She held rd’s arms up with one hand and tickled with the other. “Tickle tickle tickle!” AJ said as she tickled rainbow’s sides. “Hahahahaha! HAHAAHAHAHA! N-NOHOHOHOHOHOHO! PEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! AHAHAHAYJ!” Rainbow screamed and tried to get out of aj’s grip. “EHEHEHEHENOUGH! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” then Aj stopped. “Heh and you say I am more ticklish than you” Aj said. They both laughed about the experience and sat on the fileld.

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