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Not Our Sunset II Roadblock · 3:09pm Dec 19th, 2019
The biggest problem with me is I hate my own writing style. I rewrite and rewrite over and over again. While, for now, I have a set storyline, I have no idea how I'm going to write it. If anybody sees this, got any ideas? I already know it focuses on Pony Sunset and her time in Equestria, but I have no idea on how to continue or whether or not it's good. Help?
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YellowHornIsAGirl · 182 views
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#Not Our Sunset II
#Sunset Shimmer
#Twilight Sparkle
#Help
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#Oof
#Writing
#Not Our Sunset
I can almost sense a Sunset to Sunset, heart to heart talk coming on.
In any case don't sweat it. Bring 'em together, throw in a little insecurity, maybe a bit of pony Sunset backstory. A revelation for human Sunset and it'll work out great.
Just a suggestion mind you.
5171819
Maybe not a bad idea for an Epilogue. The story takes place during the first one, but in Equestria.
5171846
So it's focusing on pony Sunset? How much time has passed since she left?
5171919
Two weeks
5171927
So some reconciliation with Celestia, exploring Ponyville (probably similar to episode 1), some sadness from missing the Rainbooms after spending time with the mane 6 and some studying of Starswirl's portal magic spell.
5171993
Well it does take place between Twilight's coronation and The actual birth of Luster (I'm assuming she hasn't been born yet)